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Reviews for Flaw in the Blood

By : ColdWaterFairy
  • From thrnbrooke on April 08, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 4!!!
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on March 24, 2010
    Good start. Please don't forget to use more detail to describe where the characters are positioned on the bed or in a room etc. You lose me sometimes.
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  • From Juana13 on March 18, 2010
    wow, great so far!! hope the next chapter is up soon : )
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  • From tigermisse23 on March 18, 2010
    I loke this story so far. It has a good start.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 18, 2010
    I sooo can't wait for chapter 3!!!!
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  • From luvlustblood on March 17, 2010
    So far so good.
    Can't wait for another chapter.
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  • From on March 17, 2010
    This is amazing! I cannot wait for the future chapters!
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on March 17, 2010
    I like it a lot!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 17, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 2!!! What happened to Draco? Who whipped him? Are both of his parents dead?
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  • From Jilliane on March 17, 2010
    (Chapter 1)

    Harry seemed awfully quick to jump to Draco's aid, which makes this an intriguing start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and finding out exactly what happened to Draco.
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