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By : SpeedyTomato
  • From hellangelhellina on July 06, 2010
    LOVE THIS STORY.

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  • From Darkless on July 01, 2010
    How fun is this 'what if' story? I've been enjoying it emmensely. Please say there will be more? Maybe a little angst/strife too? I'm such an angst whore. I really am. :P
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  • From JanisJ on July 01, 2010
    I'm loving the premise of this story.... I waited on starting it until there were more chapters and now I just want MORE!!!! :) Muses be with you, I hope to see more soon :)
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  • From ladyedgecombe on June 30, 2010
    I keep waiting for Harry's glamour to slip. lol. Can't wait for that one. Nice smut action. keep it coming.
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  • From CodyMThomas on June 30, 2010
    this story is adorable and hot and I can't wait for another chapter. ^_^ hope there's another update soon!
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  • From fatladysinging on June 21, 2010
    This story looks like a good read, but I've gotta point out a few technical issues. In your list of bad guys, Khmer Rouge was the movement. Pol Pot was the name of the mass-murdering fuckhead (to quote Eddie Izzard). Also, and this is a big one, the word is "expatriate". Please please please go back and fix this.
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  • From Eldorna on June 20, 2010
    So far I like it...one little nitpick....sorry....In chapter 1 you listed a bunch of tyrants: Hitler, Stalin etc... you listed Khmer Rouge, as well. Khmer Rouge was the name for the communist party in Cambodia- it's not a person... I believe you were thinking of Pol Pot the most famous party leader/dictator of the Khmer Rouge
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  • From ANON - ryo on June 10, 2010
    great new chapter. Loved it.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 10, 2010
    Yeah!!!! Soooo need chapter 9!!!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on June 09, 2010
    Please please PLEASE let Harry's secret come out soon! I can't wait for the fireworks!

    Great job as always!
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  • From sanda on June 09, 2010
    good chapter
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 02, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 8!!!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on June 01, 2010
    Can't wait until Harry is revealed again! Great job here!
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  • From ANON - Al on June 01, 2010
    Yeah! they are comming back! Hey! don't make Harry go back to england, cause he will be miserable there, and you know it. What do you say to leave Lucius and Severus in France?(hint)(hint)
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  • From ANON - vicki on June 01, 2010
    nice i cant wait for the next chapter do they find out who jay is and does it blow up in his face or do they except him either way see you next time bye
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