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Reviews for It Was Supposed to be Over

By : nmos
  • From missanimegrl on June 09, 2010
    An intriguing plot! Snape returned as a ghost? I think he has many things yet to live for, and he just wouldn't admit it! HAH! Ah well, I'm getting into it. I hope you post more of it soon!!
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  • From alina290 on June 03, 2010
    I like her thoughts on what she should start to do. I hope that Snape will change his mind about staying alive once she brings him back. I know I am getting ahead of myself, but that is how it is sounding to me. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you for this one.
    Liz
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  • From voraciousreader on June 01, 2010
    Nice setup chapter. I like the details of his house and library, as well as the further character development you have included. Also, thank you for the response; I wasn't expecting you to mention my question directly! Is anyone going to be missing Hermione while she's researching for Snape? I would think she would need to contact someone and let them know she's all right and no rogue survivors have harmed her.
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  • From use2b2t2 on June 01, 2010
    Yea! an update. I admiot that I'm very intrigued with this story. There are so few ghost Severus stories. You have started this very well.

    Mare
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  • From Angie30 on May 10, 2010
    This story is fantastic,keep going. :)
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  • From voraciousreader on May 10, 2010
    I didn't. Just something about your tone in the A/N at the start of the story gave me the impression that other sites may not have been as welcoming as they perhaps should have been. Your Snape is very nearly canon, and that is quite refreshing, I must say. Will we ever find out how he became a ghost? According to Sir Nicholas it was because he was afraid of dying, but Snape was welcoming it. Just curious.
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  • From alina290 on May 10, 2010
    I like this very much so far. I do love good Severus/Hermione pairing. I did not think that Resurrecting him would be an option though. I look forward to the next chapter.
    Liz
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  • From winter748 on May 02, 2010
    Your story is not horrible. So don't think that anymore. It's a very good beginning and well written. I am very interested to see where it will go. Thanks.
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  • From alina290 on May 02, 2010
    I have not a story like yours yet so this is my first ghost type story. I hope you will update soon. Looking forward to see how Snape manifests himself to Hermione.
    Liz
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  • From amd2175 on May 02, 2010
    Keep writing please!!! This is very interesting!
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  • From voraciousreader on May 01, 2010
    I don't think it's horrible--you bring up a couple of good points and your writing style is clear and detailed. You also give an excellent description of the effects that PTSD and survivor's guilt can have. beta'd or not, I noticed only a few small errors and they were nothing to worry about, really. As for the rejections by other websites: their loss, our gain. Have a good time.
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