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By : grugster
  • From on September 30, 2010
    I have no idea why someone wouldn't like this chapter! Loved it!!!
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  • From Citten on September 30, 2010
    you shouldn't feel nervous--yet. ;) you know you can fix it really well dont you by just posting the next chapter ASAP. :) i know i am not really into slash but that was well written and i am look very forward to the next chapater so PLEASE update soon!!! :)
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  • From magentasouth on September 30, 2010
    this story is awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Elphaba on September 29, 2010
    Hot, hot, hot, awesome chapter!
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  • From Remarkable on September 29, 2010
    that was a very sweet chapter with severus and nevill
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  • From ANON - xcwolf on September 29, 2010
    i dont see why you were so worried about this chapter. it was done beautifully. please update soon!!! i want to see what happens next with hermoine and ferir.
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  • From StillHorny on September 29, 2010
    I must admit, that I am glad that you had Neville lose his virginity first. It was sweet and erotic at the same time.

    I do not normally read slash, but this story line is just too good. Even the slash parts. I think that it is because you have the whole Dominant/submissive relationship to make it so DAMN EROTIC!!

    Thank you, and I look forward the the next chapter with Hermoine. Please post it soon!?!?!?!?!
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  • From circe266 on September 29, 2010
    Neville's first time was very sweet and well written. I enjoyed reading it (although I was really hoping to read Hermione's first time). Please please please don't make us wait a whole week to read Hermione's experience. *looks hopefully at author*

    I noticed a few minor errors: "Loosing" should be "Losing" in the title, "prostate" is mistyped as "prostrate" once, "breath" and "breathe" were mixed up in a few places. Much better than I would be able to manage if I were writing in a foreign language! :-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2010
    okay i am FINALLY able to write a reveiw sorry it is so very so in coming! i loved, loved, loved, Loved the chapter! :) i love the power she has and the way in which she uses it! :) i loved how she used it and the instict she has with it. i am also going to go crazy waiting to see (well read really) there-ferir and hermione's- interaction! i am so, so, so hoping that is the next chapter and i so waiting for more! update soon!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - CharlotteBlack on September 27, 2010
    More please??? :)
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  • From Visitkarte on September 26, 2010
    With the weapons of a woman... She fights hard.
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  • From ANON - sarah on September 26, 2010
    Best story ever!! I am really loving this, hope you add more soon! Also, to be not a native speaker of English your story is even more amazing!
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  • From ANON - xcwolf on September 25, 2010
    I loved this chaper. You really did a good job of showing that the wolves have a softer side, but arent willing to be pushovers. hope you update soon, because i cant wait to see where this heads.
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  • From ANON - kadajclone on September 24, 2010
    i demand you continue this brilliant fic, havnt seen one this good in a long time. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on September 23, 2010
    Loved It!!!! As always you delivered another great chapter.
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