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By : grugster
  • From purpleann on September 23, 2010
    LOVED this one! I love how the dominants all chuckled at her when she growled at them. Adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter...i HOPE we get to see Hermione's first time with her alpha!!! You're killing me here with the anticipation! Also, will Yorik be rewarded for helping her to "loosen up"? What's going to happen when Nev and Hermione meet again after they've embraced their inner wolves? I wish you wrote longer chapters!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Elphaba on September 23, 2010
    Oh That was agood chapter. I love how you put who will be involved in the chapter at the top!
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  • From Remarkable on September 22, 2010
    Just started reading your story and I really like it so far. It is very original and I like how you've laid out the rules and tiers of the pack. Post again soon!
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  • From ANON - colao on September 22, 2010
    Like it? L O V E it. Anxiously await more.
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  • From circe266 on September 22, 2010
    Ooooh, I love that Hermione is realizing and enjoying her newfound power over the dominants. And I love seeing how they react to her.

    Naughty Fenrir for not letting her wash up before her examination! I have a feeling that he is about to get some much-anticipated relief from his blue balls. I can't wait to read it (and read about her first time with the cuddly Yorik, too)!

    Please update soon
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  • From StillHorny on September 22, 2010
    As always, I LOVE the new chapter!!

    I like that the "pup" does have some control. Hemoine had better keep that control in check or I foresee her getting punished. But than again, she might just LIKE that.

    More soon...PLEASE!
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  • From SophieBro on September 20, 2010
    great story so far, sounds clich
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  • From thatsjustsuper on September 19, 2010
    I am adoring the development of this story, and am eagerly awaiting each update. :) so soon please?
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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on September 19, 2010
    YAY!!! This chapter made my whole day. I can't wait for more. Great Job.
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  • From StillHorny on September 18, 2010
    Oh that is sooo HOT!!! To find out that Fenrir was watching!!!!

    I also can't wait for Neville to finally give in to Snape. Then have Hermoine SUBMIT to Fenrir.

    I have to tell you are killing me here. How can I go to sleep now, I am so wet and Master has already retired for the evening!?!?!?!?
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  • From Ravengirl7 on September 17, 2010
    Just finished reading from the beginning, what a HOT story! I love the world you've created and your original characters are awesome! I'm glad Hermione and Yoric got to have some fun, I'm really starting to love him!
    I don't mind that the story doesn't always focus on Fenrir and Hermione. I really like your scenes with the other pack members as well. I can't wait to keep reading!
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  • From Elphaba on September 17, 2010
    So, I found I have Nerve issues in my toes, and that makes me realize you wrote an awesome good chapter/story/porn. Great job I will read the next chapter with bated breathe to see what happens with Hermione and Fenrir!
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  • From ANON - ChralotteBlack on September 17, 2010
    I really liked the Hermione and Yorik interaction - so hot!

    I can see both Hermione and Neville's "wolf" is coming out.

    Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - colao on September 16, 2010
    I smile every time I see you've added a chapter. Thank you!
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  • From circe266 on September 16, 2010
    There were many, many things I loved about this chapter. A few faves:

    Severus: "We need to do it to make you survive." LOL, this is such a 'guy' thing to say.

    Fenrir AND Yorik beating off to fantasies about Hermione, while she, totally clueless, sleeps on. (BTW, I really hope that we get to read about Yorik's fantasy coming true!)

    Hermione cunningly, if unconsciously, manipulating Yorik to call him by his name instead of his title.

    Yorik, ecstatic that he gets full-on, naked frottage when he only hoped for above-the-waist petting, thinks that Fenrir will praise him for getting her off. I hope that he is right; I love the Yorik character and his interactions with Hermione, and hope to read more.

    I'm glad to see that Neville's and Hermione's inner wolves are coming out to play. I can't wait to read your next chapter!
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