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Reviews for The Doll House

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  • From serinblackmoon on August 27, 2010
    Nice! Very nice! I like how you are showing their growth and bond while still dealing with such horrid things. It's amazing at how people can change when they have a common goal in something. Great draw on Wicca and Demonology. I can't wait to see how much more you tie them in.


    Can't wait for the next chapter!


    Lady Serin
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  • From Solariel89 on August 27, 2010
    I love it. And I'm so glad you made the distinction between Wicca and black magic. Most people paint them both in the same evil light. I like the whole concept of the story. It's really enjoyable and dark. I can't wait to see what's next!

    P.S.: Are we going to see more of the ghosts of the children or Claira? I enjoy the interaction with them.
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  • From ANON - mary potter on August 25, 2010
    hey, do you know the Malfoy Manor?
    http://malfoymanor.grangerenchanted.com/themanor/
    it is a great place for posting fics like this.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on August 24, 2010
    Gosh Darn it, you really know how to get the juices flowing. Moremoremorepleasepleaseplease.
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  • From ANON - Smurphy on August 24, 2010
    Oh wow that was a very sexy chap... Dracos already lost to hermione but his was chasing his tail for her when they first entered the house.... I wonder how that's gonna change the dynamic with the spirits... And good eye hermione in realizing that the dolls are a huge part in this that should be an interesting chap when they release the spirits... I do wonder what they will find in the cellar obviously him... I love how take charge hermione is and how she knows what she wants and goes for it!!! Loved the chap and I cannot wait for the next!!!
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  • From KellyJCR on August 24, 2010
    That made my computer screen fog up! Love their ease with each other. Well done!!!!
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  • From Firelady112 on August 24, 2010
    Wow. Thank you for the update!
    Last weekend, I summarized your story for my sister and future brother-in-law. Both of them didn't understand how I could continue reading, they said it was way too creepy. And I do have to admit, that walking my dog through the forest at nighttime didn't feel quite as good after reading your story... ;)
    However, I think Hermione's got it wrong when it comes to the dolls, doesn't she? My brother-in-law asked whether the dolls were really Horcruxes, and after reconsidering - especially the heartbeat of the dolls - I think he's right. (Don't spoil it if he is, don't spoil it if he isn't, please!) After all, Slytherin's locket also had what JKR described as a tiny heartbeat... plus, if Maxwell's evil is comparable to Voldemort's evil, that would be because he'd made himself "immortal" in the same way, wouldn't it?

    Please, please update soon. I have to admit, as much as I love lemons and good hot action, I was actually a little disappointed that you didn't have them go back into the house to face more of its mysteries... :(

    The way you portray Hermione is very refreshing, in my opinion - she's not the frigid little bashful girl so many other fictions have her be. Truthfully, while I read this latest sex scene, I wished I could be as fantastic a lover as her... haven't been with a man in over four years, so I don't know if I could ;)

    I'm waiting for your next update! You said the story is already finished...? *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on August 24, 2010
    A very pleasurable interlude for the hero and heroine! Very hot and ummm....yeah, you get the picture...LOL

    Can't wait to see how they resolve releasing the souls of all the children. Those dolls have me creeped out......

    Love it!!

    Love and Hugs,
    Lady B*
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  • From ancheto on August 24, 2010
    You write the BEST sex scenes EVER! lol
    this story is great, keep up the great work =)
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  • From serinblackmoon on August 24, 2010
    Dear Gods! Those two are insatiable! They are going to breed like bunnies lol! I can't wait to see how our baddie warps and twists their growing affections!

    Can't wait for a new chappie!!!


    Lady Serin
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  • From ANON - Mila-Renae on August 24, 2010
    I tried to look you up on ff.net. I couldn't find you. If you're on there my screen name is Mila-Renae. lol. Anyway, great chapter! I always saw a bit of a dominate in Hermione. lol.
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  • From apkblack on August 24, 2010
    That was absolutely delicious. One of the sexiest no-frills sex scenes I've ever read.
    You are truly skilled that way. LOL

    Looking forward to the updates, seeing what happens in the house ...
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 23, 2010
    Way to go, Hermione! Take what you want, how you want and don't apologize. I enjoyed that almost as much as he did. LMAO Sexy, delicious, and yummy. Thank you! I liked his idea of putting off going back in that house by having a shagfest. :-) You said to enjoy and I did. Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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  • From nitesfool on August 23, 2010
    IT's about freakin time u updated ( i find myself loggin on several times a day now to check for updates) and my, what a GLORIOUS addition u gave! i'm very happy. So what's it going to be, are u going to let them go check out where he killed himself first then break the dolls, or the other way around. i figure if they do the dolls first, then he'll come back angry like last time, but if they do the cellar first, he may not rear his ugly little head just yet. And when's hermione goin to read the journal that she picked up... i'm dying to know what's inside!hnmmmmm..... so many questions and so many possible twists... i just love to play them out in my head.... of course... this is all ur world... but i like to write the rest of the story in my head and then see how close my version matches up to urs... that's all.... update soon!!!! i'm waiting!
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  • From BillsBedroom on August 23, 2010
    Um, okay, wow, sorry I am just about to grab the hubs and have a shag fest of my own, after the last two chapters. Don't have the words for the hotness of these chapters. I'll be more coherent, I hope, for the next chapter! Love YOU!!
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