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Reviews for The Doll House

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - akire on August 23, 2010
    loved this fic! its not the usual headboy/girl etc and focuses on both characters! and loved that hermione here isn't a prude or a proud virgin. will be looking forward in your next update! good work!!! :))
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  • From ANON - AngelBaby on August 22, 2010
    CH 6: Can I look after Draco's bits? I was never into blonds until I started reading your fics and now i'm quite addicted but they're Malfoy's aren't they, who wouldn't be? The dolls scarred the crap out of me. Always had nightmares about my dolls coming alive, ahhh......
    CH 7: Holy shit indeed. Your forgiven for the wait on the update. Your man's back, we can wait.

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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 20, 2010
    I was wondering when we'd get to a naked draco and hermione, and let me tell you it was not a moment too soon! I was in need of a good lemon! Lol.
    I do have to say, this story gives me the chills. To know what kind of evil they're dealing with... I get goosebumps! Normally I'd be extremely apprehensive about reading something like this, but I am extremely interested!

    Can't wait for the next update!

    ~Aundree'a
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  • From ANON - Smurphy on August 20, 2010
    Oh wow what a perfect sexy and steamy moment!!!!! You wrote their passion for each other perfectly!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 20, 2010
    I love the way he "saved the day!" lol I have to say you wouldn't be able to get me in that house with a gun to my temple! And, how do neither one of them realize what the dolls are? lol The most obvious answer is usually the right one, guys! ha ha ha I look forward to seeing their reactions upon waking. ;-) Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2010
    Now that's a climax!!!!! :)
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  • From chiquitaf16 on August 19, 2010
    This story is awesome. Normally it is the angst and my curiosity to see where the relationship of the main characters are going that drives me to continue reading a story. However for this story I desperately want to see how they "clean" this house from this evil. I also love how you hint on how the souls can be saved by damaging the dolls however if they have to go through that every time they free a doll they wont survive. You make this story real enough that i wouldn't read it in it's entirety alone at night. Not to mention that was probably one of the most intense lemons that I have ever read. Thanks.
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  • From KellyJCR on August 19, 2010
    You began with me bing disturbed and then you ended with a bang, literally! You really have a wounderful imagination for horror. I loved the addition of the flies. Being raised a catholic it really resonated with me and things I was told growing up. I still think the dools hold the souls of the children. It does make me wonder about Polly and why she still haunts the grounds of her demise. Can't believe you had them in the sack so quickly but it was called for after what they had been through. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
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  • From mmccargish on August 19, 2010
    This is amazing, I am so glad I took the time to start it. School is getting ready to start, so I was putting off starting anything new for a while, but after several days of trying to resist I just couldn't any longer and I am so glad I gave in. I am always amazed by your gift for attention to detail without weighing down the story. It is the perfect balance of dark, brooding, and malevolent against the sweet, flirty,but still slightly snarky and totally amusing relationship between Draco & Hermione. I think the only way the horror effect could be more perfectly was if I was reading this in the middle of the night during a thunder storm; however, it is all sunny skies this afternoon and I was still left with a lingering creepy feeling. Excellent job! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on August 19, 2010
    Holy hot shower smutiness! :D But honestly, I loved the whole chapter (are you surprised? I didn't think so.) The fly thing disgusted me, but is that true what Hermione told Draco about Beelzebub? If it is I certainly didn't know that. Can confess to getting a little hot and bothered by Draco's use of daark magic to get them out of the house? LOL

    Love it!!

    Love and Hugs
    Lady B*
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  • From sevsheart on August 19, 2010
    Damn!!! Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - mayrz on August 19, 2010
    I look forward to your updates every other day..
    It's always a "pleasure" reading your stories, it's great!
    Keep up the good work!!
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  • From goldentrio on August 19, 2010
    Welcome back! :]
    I always love when you write Draco and Hermione stories, I don't think you write them enought to be honest *cough cough*
    Hahah just kidding, but anyway I love this so far! Can't write for things to heat up :D
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  • From amerereader on August 17, 2010
    I love this story so far. The details you put into the killer's story was very good, and creeeeepyyyy! I don't know what else to say other than this story is awesome! And I cannot wait for more! Please update soon!

    -A Mere Reader
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  • From Firelady112 on August 17, 2010
    I just only found this now and what can I say, you have me hooked! :)
    Hopefully you'll find the time to continue this soon... I need to know what happens next, and I'm pretty sure Hermione will let Draco into her honey pot *chuckles*
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