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Reviews for Things Don\'t Go As Planned

By : Seawitch
  • From ANON - Three on April 22, 2016
    why is Ron calling Hermione his girlfriend? It's only third year. Why is Dumbledore acting so out of character?

    Do you read about the characters you're writing at all? Or is this just gonna be a juvenile (both in tone and origin) smut bunny?
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  • From ANON - Meeshs Wand on November 17, 2015
    Really need to finish this one. It's stunning about Lily. I'm a bit confused with the mention of Moody then Lupin. It sounds like they're one and the same person often.
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  • From puppuphk on January 21, 2015
    Great story, though I kept getting confused about how you kept confusing Mad-Eye Moody with Moony who is Remus's wolf.
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  • From purefaith91 on June 11, 2011
    Poor Harry. I swear if it is not one thing, it is twenty. Love that you have Harry standing up for Hermione as she will need him to still be her friend...her real friend that is there for her too. It is a shame that Harry takes on everyone's problems as his own though. Great chapter. p
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  • From jyoung84 on June 10, 2011
    hell has nothing on harry, go potter go. keep up the good work, Atra estern
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  • From purefaith91 on May 16, 2011
    Harry is going to be on Hermione's side, which she needs with her life as it is now. And it looks like Snape is going to have to pull out some potions to prove that Lily is the real Lily. She and Snape have sure been busy these past years...so why is he always in such a bad mood and why is he so mean to Harry? Can't wait to find out. p
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  • From jyoung84 on May 15, 2011
    i love it. sorry did not reply last chapter, was out of town. i feel sorry for lupin, can not win for losing lol. keep up the good work
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  • From mudbloodprincess1030 on May 09, 2011
    I'm loving the story, but I have to agree with purefaith91, calling lupin's wolf "moody" instead of "moony" is becoming very confusing for me. How does lupin know about lily? Or is he thinking that Snape is with Ginny?... Hmmm... Very good story though cant wait for more :)
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  • From itachiblood on April 24, 2011
    i really cant wait to hear remus point of view. maybe herimone and remus can have a talk. or when he goes on the prowl he can talk to her. im not suprised that harry acted the way he did after all he thought she was dead for his whole life.
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  • From purefaith91 on April 23, 2011
    Ewww. I wonder if Ginny is up to no good or if she is spying? Wanted to ask you...did you make Remus "Moody" instead of "Moony" on purpose? I always first think of Mad Eye Moody, but if he is not going to be in your story, I will keep that in my mind. Still so proud of Hermione and am really looking forward to seeing Remus crawl (even though I love him). Excellent!!! p
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  • From LuciusMalfoyisfemale2 on April 11, 2011
    This is a good story but I'm having to scroll side to side to read it and it might be my computer. Can you fix it?
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  • From purefaith91 on April 06, 2011
    You have my curiousity piqued. It makes Hermione's situation that much sadder knowing that Harry is about to get the family he wants so badly. How mature of Lupin to give a class to embarrass HG because she would not "submit" to him. Lupin (of the baby boomer age) has his work cut out for him with a girl born in an era where women are raised and treated differently than in his time and being a wolf is not going to deter her much...his work is cut out for him. Go Hermione!!! p
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  • From itachiblood on April 06, 2011
    great job!!!! i wonder how hermione is going to deal with remus and his wolf side
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  • From jyoung84 on April 06, 2011
    ok as much as i hate snape i think it is time i cut him a break. good job as always S
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  • From purefaith91 on April 01, 2011
    Yay for the quick update!! you are right that the Headmaster puts the dumb in Dumbledore in the extreme. Love that you have Lily with Snape. Now I wonder if he is just hiding her family there or if he is with her and it is their family (hoping for the latter). One final thing on old Albus and his, do you think I would hire someone who would hurt a student, if he ever says it again, Hermione should point out that he did hire the werewolf that bit her on school grounds during the school year. I am really glad that she has Harry in the know now so that hopefully she will have someone on her side. Don't let her withhold what Lupin did to her to protect Harry...she is only 14 and someone needs to recognize what has been done to her. p
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