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Reviews for The Wolf, the Otter, and the Slytherin

By : Tri
  • From Sampdoria on May 19, 2011
    Another great chapter, I am impressed and completly intrigued by your plot of using the scars from Dolohovs curse, very well written and plotted. I am very much looking forward to read more.
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  • From winter748 on May 19, 2011
    Very good writing. I like tying them together with Dolohov's spell and will be interested in seeing what Hermione does (and we know she'll do something)that causes Severus to be added to the mix. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - april on May 19, 2011
    Good chapters so far. I like the idea of all four men. :) Hermione could handle it. lol
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  • From cosmoGirl666 on May 18, 2011
    good chap :)
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  • From redeyedemon on May 18, 2011
    Draco.
    I'd really like to see howo this goes down, and keep reading, and my vote is Draco.
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  • From Goddess81 on May 18, 2011
    I like the idea of the purple spell linking them together, I can't wait to see how you tie Severus into their partnership.

    If you want to bring in one of the malfoys then I think that maybe using ron or harry would be a fun way to go.

    I look forward to your next chapter Xx
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  • From Sampdoria on May 18, 2011
    Interesting first chapter, I liked it. I loved that you "saved" Remus and my vote goes for you saving Severus too, if anyone deserves another chance for happiness and a free life it would be Severus. Besides, i find the threesome with Hermione, Remus and Severus very, very sexy:-))
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  • From winter748 on May 18, 2011
    Well, if you want to continue the theme of someone thought dead but now alive, like Remus, then I vote for Severus. Also, there would be more angst there since they have a history together already. Interesting idea, pretty good writing but does need some clean up. Thank you.
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  • From Jewels812 on May 18, 2011
    Great start...I think Severus would be delious to include with Remus and Hermione....I enjoy Lucius and Draco but I think given that the war is just over that either of them wouldn't have the history and chemistry to get involved with R & H
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  • From Goddess81 on May 18, 2011
    Sexy Severus all the way, I don't see either of the Malfoys with Remus Xx
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