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Reviews for Shades of Grey

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - rigger42 on August 31, 2015
    I'm actually kind of disappointed with the time jump and *hand wave* that now they are all kissing and moving the relationship along. I would have liked to have read the scene where Lucius admits to the attraction, and see how Severus got pulled in to actually say anything.
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  • From ANON - rigger42 on August 31, 2015
    These are the most aware and involved snakes ever. LOL. I have to wonder, even with the foreshadowing of marriage bonds protecting Harry from testifying, wouldn't the DMLE still be able to question both men directly under Veritaserum if they have cause to believe they kidnapped Harry? Or would it happen that Harry could say he ran away and met up with them...or something....and nobody could question him under Veritaserum, so there would be no justification for questioning the other two because they couldn't bring charges?

    If Sirius has legal guardianship he could always say he approved Harry hiding away, so there is also no fuss about them keeping an underage wizard away from his guardian. Sure, everyone will be pissed, but if he says it was to remove the horcrux and stop Albus' machinations, I could see Sirius pulling that off.
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  • From ANON - TheLovedGranger on August 28, 2015
    This story is absolutely fantastic. I love your writing style and who you ship. Please update soon I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on August 25, 2015
    Fabulous new chapter! Dumbledore scares me, however. He is such a horrible man to be planning Harry's death for his greater good. If he tells others about Harry being a horcrux, they might kill him thinking they would be stopping Voldemort. After all, Dumbledore's minions worship his word just as much as Voldemort's do his. Excellent update! Can't wait to see what you have planned for Harry, Severus and Lucius next!
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  • From ANON - starr on August 25, 2015
    after everything that has happened Dubbledork still has it that he needs Harry for it ! man o man dumb ass that he is .....happey that Amelia understood everything Black and :upon had to say...and that Harry is safe and needs to stay away !!!!! wow a lot happened here , so good !!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!! really enjoy all of your work !!! :):)):)
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  • From BAFan on June 25, 2015
    Ch. 54

    Yay, things are finally moving along with Severus! Granted, it's at a snail's pace, but at least it's forwards not backwards, 'cause we never know what to expect from you, lol. Speaking of snails:

    "' . . . He said he and Remus would see what they could wiggle out of the old man with what they found.. . .'"

    You've used this (wiggle) more than once in this context. I think the word you really want is "winkle," which is British slang for extracting something that is difficult to obtain - often, as in this case, information. It derives from the difficulty in extracting the meat from wrinkles, a type of edible snail.
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  • From ANON - starr on June 24, 2015
    ok Dubbles really needs to find that Dialium and fast !!!!! There idea of telling some things is good they need for Black and Lupin to do it and tell Bones !!!! so good !!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!
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  • From teriwright on June 24, 2015
    I think it's a good idea for the trio to come clean as it were, with Amelia. She would be the ultimate protection in the aftermath.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on June 24, 2015
    Excellent new chapter! I wonder, however, if Harry will ever be safe with Dumbledore still alive? He will be convinced his ideas about the prophecy must be right and Harry has to die. Thank goodness Harry is safe with Lucius and Severus, and that Remus and Sirius are helping all they can. Wonderful new chapter! Can't wait to know what you have planned for them next!
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  • From Leania07 on May 14, 2015
    Yay, Severus is finally on board with everything! I love it; just cuddling, though I'm sure Severus would refuse to call it such...*claps* Also letting you know that, yes, I'm still reading; I've just taken a break from reading and writing for a bit. Thought I'd get this in before I head to bed; another wonderful chapter and I eagerly await the next!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - starr on May 04, 2015
    can't believe that all of them have not thought of the ROR it's there !!!!!!! so glad to see Snape start to be with Harry !!!!!! Thank you so much for the update !!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on May 04, 2015
    Marvelous update! Thank goodness Sirius and Remus are destroying the horcrux's, I never could understand in the books why Dumbledore knew about them but left it to children to destroy them. It is good that in your story the adults are taking charge. Hopefully Dumbledore will do some good and be able to protect Hogwarts. Excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on May 04, 2015
    Looks like they're getting closer to finding Ravenclaw's diadem! It's almost over. Excellent update!
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  • From rigger42 on April 27, 2015
    Slow burn but more worthwhile for it, yes? ;)
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  • From rigger42 on April 27, 2015
    So.... I find myself in the role of disgruntled romantic because Lucius loves Narcissa and Severus has determined Lily was his one lifelong love. Hot, sexytimes is fun, but I'm pouting over the idea the bond will be only physical with a somewhat warm affection and they'll break it once the war is over so that Luc can go back with his family and Severus with his memories.

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