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Reviews for Shades of Grey

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - autumngold on July 14, 2014
    Wonderful update! I am so glad that Harry, Severus and Lucius have found another way to keep in touch with Sirius and Remus. I am also glad that the three are away from all of the bad things that are happening. Hopefully Bella is too insane to remember any hiding spots that Lucius have. That woman is one scary creature. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - tina.maki on July 12, 2014
    I actually like that there is no smut (yet, I assume when seeing how you described the Story...).
    No that I don't appreciate some good smut, but I also like plot. And 14 year old Harry having sex with those two would be weird, even just reading it. 15 yea old not so much, for some reason. Maybe because I started experimenting around that time. And because 16 is the age of consent where I live...
    Anyway, I like that story. Even though the tile reminds me of 50 shades. I only read the 1rst, but I didn't enjoy that book at all. Your story is certainly wayy better!
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  • From LyraRFIM on June 25, 2014
    I'm excited to learn the trio's animagus forms!
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  • From Calmzone1 on May 22, 2014
    great story - can't wait for more. I got the update for this chapter, realized I hadn't read the story yet and ... you kept me up until 5 am! and then I fell asleep, woke up and continued until I reached the current ending. You are an excellent writer. Thanks for sharing your ideas.
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  • From ANON - alicem on May 16, 2014
    I really love all of your stories but esp this one.

    Will Harry get his men?

    Will the war end with all of them safe and Dumbles/Voldie take the fall?

    Can't wait to see what comes next!
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  • From ANON - snape_lust on May 05, 2014
    Oh Lucius, you naughty boy ;-) I'm happy to see that Harry isn't the only one struggling with internal issues of sexuality and identity. will we see Severus' POV as well?

    the advice from Lucius about Sirius hitting the ministry hard, not just for Sirius' sake but for the future of Severus and Lucius was something I hadn't ever thought of or read in other fanfiction stories. Well done!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on April 18, 2014
    I like Harry's silver lining to becoming a snake animagus. Wonderful update.
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  • From ANON - evee87 on April 05, 2014
    Love this story, can't wait for the next chapters, also looking for the romance between Sev/Harry/Lucius.I hope Dumbledore pays for everything, I hate him even more than Voldemort.
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  • From ANON - snape_lust on March 30, 2014
    Another great chapter to a fantastic story. I like how you have delayed quite a bit harry's sexual awakening and potential relationship with the three men, instead of just jumping into it. harry's changes - mental and physical - are important and shouldn't be rushed (nor should they drag on ;-) The two men are going through their own, more subtle changes that are still important. The time for their romantic relationship isn't quite here i suspect but geesh, i cannot wait to see it! :-)
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 29, 2014
    Excellent update! And 'gasp' Something sexual in the offing! I'm shocked, shocked, that you finally got around to it! ;)
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  • From BAFan on March 18, 2014
    Ch. 38

    All right, I'm caught up now, to date. Harry has at least recognized his sexuality and is on the way to accepting it. (Can't wait for that conversation with Lucius!) Severus and Lucius are out of "the mess," at least we hope they are, and events are finally starting to move. Good job all around.
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  • From BAFan on March 18, 2014
    Ch. 31

    I've been re-reading this from the beginning, as I realized I'd forgotten a lot of things from earlier in the story, so new details are catching my eye. One of them relates to Harry's waking up to find out he's undergone a huge magical growth spurt:

    "Though shaky and sore, Harry managed to get to the loo with no problem other than needing to lean on Sirius a little. Once in there, Sirius left him alone to do what he needed. Stepping back out, he let Sirius lead him over to the bed and helped him into a robe that wasn't his. That he was grateful for as he was just in some boxers."

    I think it would have been quite funny for Harry, while in the loo, to discover a significant growth in one particular part of his body, especially since at that point Sirius hadn't told him what had happened. This is not something I normally do, but I envision it happening something like this:

    "Harry breathed a sigh of relief as the bathroom door closed behind him, thankful that Sirius hadn't deemed it necessary to stay with him while he attended to his needs. Yes, he had definitely needed his godfather's assistance to walk from the bed to the loo, something that had him utterly baffled as to why he felt so weak and strange, but privacy while he peed was much appreciated, especially since it was pretty much nonexistent during the school year. Noticing that the toilet bowl seemed a lot farther down than he remembered, he braced himself on the lavatory counter with a hand that was inexplicably shaking, reached into the front of his boxers and pulled his cock free.

    "He froze, gaping and wide-eyed. Yes, he was half-hard from the pressure of his full bladder, but even so there was more of him than there should be. At least an inch, maybe more, he estimated, as well as a significant increase in his girth. Not that he had been *tiny* before, but it had been proportionate to his overall build, which of course was short and on the slight side. But now...well, definitely neither one.

    "Harry began hesitantly stroking his cock, giving a little hiss under his breath at how good it felt. It had been some time since he'd had a good wank. And although he was definitely responding to the stimulation - his estimale now was at least two inches more in length - this was not the time to indulge, he realized as the trembling in his arms and legs increased. If he continued he was likely to collapse in a heap on the floor, which would bring Sirius running, which would be more than embarrassing with the condition he was in. Not to mention that he still needed to pee. Regretfully he let his erection subside enough so he could take care of that. As he tucked himself away - with one last lingering caress and amazed look - he vowed to make sure he had some private time that night. Or sooner, if possible."

    It's rough, of course, but I thought it might bring a smile to some faces. :-D
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 17, 2014
    Looks like it's everything is heating up! Excellent update!
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  • From slmncpm on February 24, 2014
    i just found this story last night and read straight through (with only a break for sleep) and i love it! thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on February 22, 2014
    Neat.
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