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Reviews for In Servitude of the Dark : My Obiesance

By : xXxLuckyxXx
  • From kmoaton on December 12, 2012
    I've been enjoying this so much and I look forward to the next update. Did you realized that chapter 12 and 13 are the same?
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  • From ravensowleye on December 12, 2012
    I am SOOOOOOO glad that you posted again. I read your first story and then this one. I really am impressed with how you are writing and the story you've created. I'm looking forward to future posts from you. Take your time and don't rush it, promise that we'll still be here next time you post ;-)
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  • From bloodshound on December 11, 2012
    first of all, let me say welcome back and kudos for being able to get yourself together enough to continue on. thats no easy thing to do when RL decides to drop you a random arse kicking. i really was worried that this one had been abandoned and that would have been a damn shame. it's one of my top three fav har goes to voldi fics along with weapon and descent into darkness.

    now, onto the chappie.
    poor har, he's struggling to learn control and then his teenage hormones kick in. i'm glad marvey cares enough about him not to just take him up on it, but to make sure he knows what is needed and what he is truly offering with these gestures. once har understands, his submission will be one of the greatest gifts LV has ever received. i just hope LV doesn't take har for granted. i hope marvey will help har go through the book and discuss the ideas and concepts within helping him adjust.

    blinks... well, har made a dawdle of the first task huh. lol, no acromantula were permanently hurt in the performing of this first task... not by har anyway. nice one in depetrifying that baby. aragog will remember har as being both powerful AND merciful. thats sure to come in useful later.

    tch, if dumbles wasn't at least a bit suspicious after that, there'd be something serious,y wrong with his head.
    nice to ickle ronnikins finally starting to get the point. *sneers in his direction.
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  • From ANON - Sam on December 11, 2012
    ... love the story, but did you know that ch. 13 is a copy of ch. 12.....
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  • From ANON - I'm a fan of you on December 11, 2012
    you've uploaded chapter 12 first task :Acromantulas twice.
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  • From Bloodredrose13 on December 11, 2012
    Very good chapter! Can't wait for an update!

    You posted the Acromantula chapter twice btw.
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  • From ANON - Ash on November 22, 2012
    This story (and the one that preceded it) is so much fun to read, and I can tell that you've had a lot of fun writing it. The way you've written it flows so well that it immediately draws a reader in, and I absolutely loved your portrayal of Voldemort in the last chapter. I also think your Severus Snape is one for whom I can really root, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - WitheringFlower on October 26, 2012
    I hope you haven't forgotten about this story. Cuz, this is the second time I've read it, and it's still just as good as last time.
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  • From KittyChen on October 21, 2012
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! This is a wonderful story- so UPDATE~
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  • From ANON - Mandy on September 07, 2012
    Please update the story... the plot is very good and I am dying to know what will happen next

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  • From ANON - Jay on August 14, 2012
    Awesome story, you portray the characters really well and your writing style really flows so smoothly that I have trouble stopping reading... I can't WAIT to read more of it, the ritual, how Voldemort will change etc... I'm really excited... keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Sincerely on July 28, 2012
    I love your sequel, and I loved your original story! Your writing skills are very impressive to me, and I'm really enjoying your story! I hope you update it soon and I am very much looking forward to reading more!
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  • From disgruntledfairy on July 20, 2012
    I loved your first story and the sequel is turning out to be just as great! I like the plot differences between your story and J.K. Rowlings'. Definitely wasn't expecting acromantulas, but it's a great idea to punish Ron instead of dragons. Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From ANON - Shasta Pruett on July 08, 2012
    Hello! First off, I want to tell you you're doing a terrific job with this story so far! I only have a few questions that have yet to be answered.
    1. What is the meaning of the black flames?
    2. When Voldemort and Marvolo combine, will he attempt to do something to Harry that will be unwilling due to the mix of insane/sane? I mean...at first, since they mindsets won't be completely the same...?
    and 3. When will I get to see some hot and sexy action going on?

    I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

    P.S. While I was reading your story, I totally envisioned Voldie pinning Harry to a cemetary statue(totally lost the real word at the moment) and kissing the life out of him for the first time with a corpial body.
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  • From HarliqueenNight on July 01, 2012
    Omg thats all you have. God please continue, i've been so enjoying this series you've put together. I love Sirius and Snape's personalities and I love how you've put to light all the things i used to question about dumbles decision making skills! Please please continue. I read this over the span of athree days and I hate it stopped here! keep it up. you've given brand new insight into the magical world and made it something complete new and interesting. I really really hope u continue
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