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Reviews for In Servitude of the Dark : My Obiesance

By : xXxLuckyxXx
  • From bloodshound on January 17, 2012
    dammit! not again! when will ppl get the bloodly point that its the AUTHORS story to tell however they will! we can make suggestions and say what we like but that's IT unless the author has a vote on something. seriously, ppl like that piss me off and i can assure you, you will not be a forgotten author... not if this is anything to go by.

    having said that, now to comment on the actual chappie. :p it was a little choppy but like you said, you were covering a lot of info. I look forward to them un ravelling the prophesy, or it making itself known to them. especially this change whatever that means. Damn, I think I'm going to miss Marvolo.
    You had Siri dead to rights to, snickers. I wonder how long it took the slyths to realise they'd be pranked ^^ Gah, damn but ron is a waste of space as a wizard, seriously and Mio is ignorant. Did see even think to ask the house elves before she went all ranty rant. i think now. I wonder who'll drop hars name in the mix this time. I'm betting it's dumbles. Siri might have but that's way to dangerous. considering the plans they've got rolling, having attention focused on him is the last thing Har needs right now.
    looking forward to more. ^^
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  • From ANON - Minny on January 16, 2012
    I'm looking forward to Marvolo and Voldemort merging! Sirius pranking the Slytherins was very in character, but I can see him getting into trouble with Severus for that... Great description of the ritual. Just ignore the stupid reviewer. With a story as popular as this one, there will be always somebody who wants to give his two cents of BS. If ey don't like what you write, ey should go and write something emselves. Since ey'r not smart enough for that, ey have to nag real authors and waste eir time. Don't feed trolls... Remember: This is your story and dozens of readers love it just as it is. If one idiot doesn't get it, their loss.
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  • From ANON - kjpotter on January 16, 2012
    Just a thought: are the Weasleys aware of their life-debt to Harry? I will be interested in seeing how that plays out. Is it the whole Weasley family or is it just Ginny?
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  • From apless2645 on January 16, 2012
    I have been following this story from when you first started it, though I've yet to review until now. I just wanted to let you know what a wonderful job I think you're doing and not to listen to reviewers who've probably never even attempted to write a story and have nothing better to do than flame up and coming writers. I love your style, character portrayals and the nit-picky details you manage to slip in that tie everything together. Keep up the amazing work, because I can't wait to see how this progresses. :)
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  • From ANON - Drackensroost on January 16, 2012
    P.s.

    I kinda like the idea of a Siri/Sev. Their interactions are already on par with being that of a couple of kids who "don't realize things yet."
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  • From ANON - Lifvared on January 16, 2012
    LOL! Great chapter, a litlle bit short but awesome nonetheless. You're a wonderful writer and very talented too. Don't let some stupid review get to you. I am one of the Draco/fan, and even if you don't use him as much as I would like, it doesn't mean that I will tell you a bunch of awful things for it. It's your story, and you write whatever the hell you want, and I love it! I'm not usually reviewing stories until the end, because I like to read the whole story before giving my opinion, but yours is one of the fews that I've reviewed more than twice. And if you let me I will like to give a suggestion... When you let Dumbledore find out what Harry's been up to, make if feel like a bomb to him!! I want the old man to suffer!! *sinister laugh* xD Anyways, keep on with the good work. Take care!
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  • From ANON - Drackensroost on January 16, 2012
    Don't worry about the idiot. i honestly think that you have been doing a good job of 'dissolving' Harry and Ron's relationship. i have been seeing you set up the tensions more and more, and Realize that things will be fully ended when the tension comes to a head, probably around the time of Harry's name being 'pulled' from the cup. (I think, at any rate) You have been doing a wonderful job so far, so keep up the great work. Out of curiosity, have you ever thought of Keeping Hermione friends with Harry, and HER turning towards the dark?? i mean, with her thirst for learning it would make a small bit of sense. Well, to ME at any rate. Severus tried to introduce Lily to the Dark, but she was too enamored of Dumbledore and the light to do so. Harry was Hermione's first true friend, so it IS at least PARTIALLY feasable.
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  • From hpforever300 on January 16, 2012
    Hey, I just wanted to say another amazing chapter! :D you are an amazing writer man!! Don't let anyone make you feel otherwise, and those bad reveiwers can go and shove their comments up their buttholes!! Because you are great!! :D keepit up and keep it coming!! :D x
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  • From JessicaHayes02 on January 16, 2012
    I like how realistic the breakup of Rarry as friends is. I remember when i broke up from my old friends, it was gradual, not sudden and explosive. I HATE when people don't sign in when they do personal attacks on people. I also wonder on who raised them Responsible Adults or Wolves. well good chapter
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  • From savannah19742001 on January 16, 2012
    That person who wrote that is a coward...when you have a disagreement with an author story allow them a chance to respond...but I for one am totally enchanted with this story and I think the whole Ron thing is how it should be Harry has more patience and wouldn't blow up without stewing for a while...and really finding out about the prophecy is more important...
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  • From bloodshound on January 15, 2012
    Lol, with Siri the phrase 'just cause your paranoid it doesn't mean they aren't out to get you' really applies huh. ^^
    So, no exposure to 'moody' this year. awww, booo. this miss out on 'CONSTANT VIGILANCE!' *fake pouts.
    I think it's a really good idea to have Har learn weapons. I always thougt wizards were a bit to reliant on their wands. A knife in the right place can be just as effective. as for practice, it wouldn't surprise me that Sev would be skilled. nothing beats practice against a live appoinent.
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  • From savannah19742001 on January 15, 2012
    That was a perfect balance of what a person would expect from a dark lord...not a crazy dimented dark wizard...very good chapter
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  • From wolfcathope on January 15, 2012
    I am grateful that you are continuing the story and understand. Have a problem must Harry loose the ability? What about him as a animagus in some winged snake form, a form that is both dark and light-like his wand? This would show his power and help him talk to Voldemort with out others knowing.
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  • From ANON - Drackensroost on January 15, 2012
    hey. Just wanted to pop in and say I like your story, and I like where you are running with it. I also liked the weaponry section in this last chapter. I cringed when Severus told Harry to do a hundred of each of the eight swings. You also captured the 'feel' of a first time clash perfectly. Great work!


    p.s. I am a fan of scimitars and bows, myself. Especially a recurve bow with an offset handle system to compensate for being a girl.
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  • From betelgeuse on January 15, 2012
    mmm... Severus with a double edged long sword makes me salivating too :))) Anyway... it's really good to see Harry so joyful and happy, as any boy should be and it's soooo sweet to see Marvolo agreeing to anything to make him smile.
    For the unpleasent things: how much do I hate Ron (well, not that I love Hermione)?? Very, very, very much, and not only in your story. I understand the 'first boy Harry becomes friend with' thing, but I think he's really just an obtuse, jealous, ignorant person. There arent's many stories where I like him and usually in those he's OOC.
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