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Reviews for The Kit and the Incubus

By : TibbytheWitchy
  • From IsysSkeeter on February 22, 2012
    harry ashamed because of the hard on and the sex is really hillarious
    harry's boggart i actually thought that it was tom saying that he doesn't like anymore
    i wonder if draco will be a werewolf from now on
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  • From bloodshound on February 19, 2012
    oh, oh, oh luc is gonna be PISSED! And yeah, that's pretty much Lupin gone and hopefully dumbles will catch it in the neck for hiring him too. well. one can hope. >>
    Poor harry, he's still such a timid scardy kit and this will be a major shock to his system.
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  • From Leania07 on February 19, 2012
    Don't worry, technology just loves to bumble up the best of us ;). I did enjoy this chapter, though Draco got bit, O.o Oh no! Wolfy head's gonna roll for that! Poor Harry, no one explained puberty to the poor dear. I'd give him my book, but there was only one small chapter about puberty in boys...Sorry.

    Leania
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  • From savannah19742001 on February 18, 2012
    Poor Harry, he needs a vacation from all this mayham...I love this story, it is so adorable...
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  • From djaddict on February 18, 2012
    You! But! Draco!!!!!

    How could you?!?
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  • From hotflower901 on February 18, 2012
    Draco as a werewolf. Luicius is going to be pissed. Sev will come up with a better wolfbane for Draco. Someone needs to have "the talk" with Harry.
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  • From IsysSkeeter on February 17, 2012
    harry turns into a fox, owww so cute...
    i thibk remus should turn harry's side, after all harry is his best friend son. at first a little scepticall(or whatever it is written) of going against harry but in the end follow harry
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  • From RRW on February 12, 2012
    Remus should always be loyal to Harry, not Dumbledore...and probably by extension Sirius. Oh I do hope he lays into Dumbledore if he thinka logically about what he has done to Sirius and Harry.
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  • From jujukitty on February 10, 2012
    another interesting chapter, though i'd take another look at how you ended it, the way you worded it made it seem like you were talking about the past two years of harry's life, not that year and the next; you might want to actually say something along the lines of "his second year passed much the same as the first". also, you need to read back through for spelling errors, two that i remember in particular were "raven laws" and "growing hexes". that said, i look forward to seeing where you go with this
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  • From bloodshound on February 10, 2012
    nods agreement. besides, with har in slyth, the others can guard him... which he sounds like he needs very badly. I am interested though, in what it would take to make harry arc up and fight back rather than his current whimper/ cringe response.
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  • From Leania07 on February 10, 2012
    Cute so far ^.^ Watch out for spelling, seen a lot of 'Han' and I think you mean either hand(s) or than. Other than some slight misses like that, I've enjoyed it so far. Can't wait to see where you take this...I love little kit Harry, I want to snuggle and coo!

    Leania
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  • From Mizuchan24 on February 09, 2012
    I love your story even though Harry/Tom is not my favorite, I prefer Harry/Draco, but you make this pairing so cute and adorable in this story; I just can't help but read this story. I think it will be good if Remus was on Harry's side even though I know he probably doesn't like Tom because he killed Lily and James but out of Sirius and him, Remus is the most understanding and level-headed one. I think Harry needs someone on his side other then Draco, Draco's parents and Draco's friends and Tom who at least knew his parents or can just be there for him other then his family. I hope Remus and Sirius somehow end up together, I just love this pairing and it would be so cute in this story. I hope you update soon, can't wait for the next update. ^.^
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  • From djaddict on February 09, 2012
    Yes, well, you should be sorry. lol

    Since you are taking votes I would like Remus to be on Harry's side. Sirius too please!

    *Pets Harry* Loves!!

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  • From hotflower901 on February 09, 2012
    Harry would make an adorable fox. You would wonder that Tom can let him out of his sight for school. Sirius is a Black. Can't he be brought around to Tom's way of thinking. This made me smile
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  • From justpucky on February 09, 2012
    Well, Lupin's been brainwashed by Dumbles for decades, so he'll start in dumbles camp. But he is a dark creature and understands about mates, and as the DADA professor, should understand that separating a incubus mate from it's incubus is essentially a death sentence, so I think he should come around in the course of the year.

    Love submissive Harry... Although after spending the entire summer with Tom, I hope second year was slightly better than his first year (with only a few weeks to feed from Tom before the stress.)
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