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Reviews for Awakening

By : Ginzo
  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 22, 2012
    Hello again. :-) Wow, you certainly know how to surprise a person. lol Welcome back. I hope your break has been a good one. This was a fun chapter and I look forward to more whenever you put it up. :-) Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From Trelweny on July 04, 2012
    I'm really having a blast at the openness of Draco's change of sides. I also love the initiation into the Order, although I'm surprised how so many seem to know about it. Can't wait to see others' initiation marks or to at least learn their animals/creatures.

    Thanks for writing!
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  • From ksteger08 on March 01, 2012
    I like the concept of this story and can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From abbycolao on February 13, 2012
    I'm glad you reposted for I do like this tale...
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 31, 2011
    I still think you've got a nice story going. I like the characters you've built and the reasoning you've given Draco for changing. I like a hot-headed silly Ron, so it's all good with me. lol I am glad you're looking for a beta, as they would help you see the things you might have missed in your own editing. If it helps, when I write a story, I then read each chapter out loud to myself (of course mumbling the dirtier parts lol) to see if it flows like a normal conversation would, before posting it. I often find one or two more things to edit then. :-) Thanks again and good luck in uni! HG4eva
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  • From moni on January 31, 2011
    love the plot.. can't wait to find how ginny, ron & harry will react will their find out abour draco!!
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  • From newtothis on January 31, 2011
    o great a nother ron asshole story, you know what funny is that when harry was saying draco was a death eather, ron and hermoine both deffend him. so in cannon harry more the hate draco and belive he a death eater not ron. just dont make hermoine some weak girl, if you going to do bdsm, she should be the master, it would fit better.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 02, 2010
    Just got caught up on my reading and saw your update. I am really glad you're continuing this story and I look forward to more soon. Congrats on n your new girlfriend. Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2010
    What a wonderful start. I hope you can update soon, I love where this is heading so far. Very well written.
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  • From jreel08 on February 12, 2010
    your story is down
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 02, 2010
    Hey again! I liked getting the other side of the story, too. Thanks for that. I am glad to know Draco has had a real turnaround. I look forward to seeing more of him trying to convince Hermione of it, too. :-) BTW - the spacing was much better this time. Congrats on that, too! Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on February 01, 2010
    oooh yay!!! More please!!
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  • From ANON - Jillian on February 01, 2010
    Hello,

    Your fic is good so far but there are some things that need some help. The lack of punctuation is a major issue, for me anyway. This site offers Betas and there are some lovely people who like to help out. The spelling and grammar aren't too bad, but the Beta will straighten that out when s/he sorts out the lack of punctuation. Secondly, when you copy and paste your story to this site, you need to put extra spaces in between paragraphs and dialogue lines or it all ceamps in together without breaks and is hard on the reader. I hope I don't offend you with my suggestions, I don't mean to be rude, I'm just a blunt person. Thanks for sharing it with us and good luck.

    Jillian
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 31, 2010
    What a nice beginning and setup. I look forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
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