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Reviews for Controlled Emotions

By : LeviosaHex
  • From hotflower901 on April 19, 2012
    I feel so bad for Harry. He doesn't understand the rules because no one has ever been honest and open with him. It is like they all have the secret keys to the game but won't let Harry see all of the pieces. Snape, at least, did not just take Harry's virginity. But was that for Harry or for himself. How far will he go to train Harry?
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  • From Leania07 on April 19, 2012
    Wow, you did well on this. Now Harry has to accept that he has feelings for Sev, and that Sev has feelings for him. I wonder if Sev will take his own words to heart though? Let go of his guilt and shame, after all its been years and he's more than atoned for his misdeeds. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next.

    Leania
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  • From Janna on April 18, 2012
    Really good. Please continue.
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  • From Madamdragon on April 17, 2012
    Well it's clear that Severus wants to tell Harry something. Perhaps his feelings towards him? HOpe more is to come soon please.
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  • From bloodshound on April 17, 2012
    snape may not be intending to (i mean it's blatantly obvious he's interested in har)but i think he's pushing har a bit fast. after all har has had 11 years of concentrated intolerance and the steady doses over the rest and that's going to stick. It's going to take more than just a few sessions to help har realize that gay, bi sexual, het are all as normal as each other. Snape should know that. he's been in har's head enough. I think at his core, har feels that he isn't really worthy of a loving relationship and can't afford one anyway with V on the loose thus he can't fathom snape wanting to touch him 'cause he finds him attractive rather than just as a teaching aid.
    snape rather missed his window of opportunity on this one and now he's going to have to work doubly hard to get through har's guard and make him believe (cause i don't think har would believe just letting him know) that snape is attracted to him and genuinely wants him for him.
    anyway, you've done a pretty good job with conveying the emotions (shame is indeed a hard one)please do continue.
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  • From Madamdragon on April 16, 2012
    Wow this is getting interesting. I wonder if he hopes Harry will want to start a relationship. Hope it comes to that. Update again soon please.
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  • From Janna on April 15, 2012
    Pretty please continue.
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  • From hotflower901 on April 14, 2012
    sympathic and parasympatic nerve responses. I don't think I see Snape's end game. To seduce Harry, to control him or just teach him a lesson. I would have thought that with Snape's mind skills, he would have seen the truth about Harry's life long before now. Interesting
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  • From Leania07 on April 14, 2012
    Oh my word! By far the best I've read, I love this Sev! *melts into a puddle* I can't wait to read more!!

    Leania
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  • From bloodshound on April 14, 2012
    snapes a dick, no doubt about it... but is he genuinely trying to help har here, get into his pants or both. I can relate on the mis reading emotions thing. I too have trouble telling what it is i'm feeling though in har's case i think it's mostly lack of experience. he hasn't really had time or quiet to sort himself out.
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  • From Selene89 on April 13, 2012
    *jaw drops* uh uh uh... my brain just died. Awesome!!!
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  • From LaffyTaffy on April 12, 2012
    Really liked it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on April 12, 2012
    Really good first chapter. I can't wait for the rest. Please update soon. :)

    xoxo,
    kitkat
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  • From Leania07 on April 12, 2012
    Oh evil, I love it!! Wow though, I've never heard Sevy swear like that, always seemed beneath him; though it is a bit refreshing at the same time. After all he's not a saint or a monk, the guy is going to have intense emotions, and swearing is rather easy to do after all. Interesting chapter, I look forward to more of this.

    Leania
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  • From bloodshound on April 12, 2012
    so... snape is trying to make him recognize how each emotion feels physically and then convert it to... what? Unless he's just after har's arese. >>'
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