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By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From Persy on December 27, 2021

    An all-around great story 


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  • From ANON - Mrs O on January 25, 2017

    Nice one.

    An original story

    Thanks from French reader ;-)


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  • From wudelfin on February 16, 2016
    Love the twist in this sotory, ever saw it coming.
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  • From chyara on December 02, 2012
    Wish a side benefit, could have taken out the man who murdered her family.
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  • From ANON - Amber on July 07, 2012
    I hope that you do another story soon like Lucius and Hermione I cannot wait to read another
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  • From moodysavage on June 22, 2012
    *clapping & giving a standing ovation*

    *sigh* What a wonderful story. And even though I am sad to see it end I am glad for how it ended for all the characters. The cause of all the problems so went along with the real Harry Potter stories. Lucius Malfoy caused so much suffering for his wife and son because of his pride and his belief that things had to be his way. The ultimate selfish prat all the way. And once again his issues dragged in more people.

    This was a very enjoyable story to read and I thank you for sharing :)
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  • From severus49 on June 22, 2012
    It was a fast wrap-up, but a great ending for a wonderful story. Thanks so much for posting it!!
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  • From ANON - crayonbird on June 21, 2012
    Great story. I noticed a few mistakes here and there, for instance in the last chapter you use 'they're' instead of 'their', and the misspelling of the word 'wizengamot'. Other little mistakes like this take away from the overall quality of your story. Going back through with a fine-toothed comb will make your story excel.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 21, 2012
    Brava!!! That was a wild ride and a great wrap up. I like to think Draco ends well and Lucius stays slightly miserable for all he's done for his pride. Then, I imagine Severus and Hermione locked in a beach house somewhere for about three months, happily making their relationship grow. :-) Thank you!! HG4eva
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  • From ChaosLady on June 21, 2012
    Good for Lucius, the fool. I'm glad that ended well. But I'm sorry to see it end too.
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  • From ANON - colao on June 20, 2012
    brava!
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  • From witchweaver on June 20, 2012
    AHHHHH... I always love your stories.. Can't wait for your next story!
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  • From goldhorse on June 20, 2012
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
    I love fluffeh endings. Great story. I admit, you threw me for a loop at the end but it was amazing.
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  • From ChaosLady on June 20, 2012
    I hope Lucius makes the right decision!
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  • From moodysavage on June 18, 2012
    wow... I so did not see that coming. I had wondered if maybe he had a false memory and that maybe his wife was still alive and he just didn't know it. But does this now mean that she is alive somewhere and in a coma? And no one knew who did it because he didn't want anyone to know because it was all his fault? I actually don't blame Blaise for doing what he did to Lucius. Does Draco know anything?
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