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By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From moodysavage on May 24, 2012
    awwww... I adore how you ended this chapter with Severous calling Hermione his beloved. That was wonderful.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 24, 2012
    First, I wish I had a man in my life who was always ready for me when I needed him. lol Second, someone please hit Lucius with a spell that causes him pain when he's an ass. I know he would spend about a year in pain, but he would eventually learn. Jerk! Thank goodness for Severus. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - genesismom on May 24, 2012
    love that movie, jimanji. the line is spoken by the two kids that are walking on the beach where it's washed up on and is slightly covered with sand. it was directed by joe johnson and wasn't sure if you wanted alan and sarah or if you wanted judy and peter. robin williams and bonnie hunt were great. It's sometimes surprizing what i like about stories. One of the things i like about this story is hermione's hearing aid. If everything could be solved with magic why would people die and just as tragic how would they live if everything was easy, just a wave of the wand. People need challenges, failures and disappointments just as much as they need success and pleasure. thanks for the reminder.
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  • From ChaosLady on May 24, 2012
    Wonderful! Lucius is such an ass! I got nothing on the quote, sorry. I'll just take my fudge and run.
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  • From ANON - JuliaBlack on May 24, 2012
    The quote is from Jumanji starring Robin Williams and Bonnie Hunt.....Awesome story btw!
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  • From ANON - Kaida on May 24, 2012
    Hi!

    I hate, that your chapters so shorts... :P

    To the game:
    Film: Jumanji
    Directed: Joe Johnston
    Stars: Kirsten Dunst as Judy, Bradley Pierce as Peter (and Robin Williams as Allan Parrish, Bonnie Hunt as Sarah)
    The last line? Good question. Florica Vlad or Sarah Gilson. I tried to find it with the help of the google, but I wasn't able. Anyway, If I'm right, they are the two girl on the beach in the last scene, and one of them said the words.
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  • From ANON - Amber on May 24, 2012
    Wow well Lucius got a shock :) hope that him and Severus talk soon about that that will be fun :)
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  • From ChaosLady on May 22, 2012
    Excellent chapter! Looks like Lucius is making progress. The movie quote is from "Spaceball:The Movie" The actress who said the line is Joan Rivers and the director is Mel Brooks.
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  • From ANON - Saphire Phoenix on May 22, 2012
    I happen to be a huge Mel Brooks fan, although Young Frankenstein (franc un stene!) is my favorite, not the movie that you are quoting which is Space Balls. I have always believed that the size of Lord Dark Helmuts actual helmut was an over compensation for something....and I wouldn't have wanted to marry Prince Valium either. He might have fallen asleep at a VERY inopportune moment!
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  • From ANON - LydiaLovegood on May 22, 2012
    Spaceballs!! That was the robot voiced by Joan Rivers, she said it to the princess, Daphne Zuniga. lol. Acted in, written and directed by Mel Brooks!! Loved it. Loved this chapter too, waiting on Lucius to start understanding some things and working through his pain and guilt and anger. Waiting on some more substance, though I do love snippits of Snape and Hermione. :)
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  • From ANON - scifiaunt on May 22, 2012
    Mel Brooks' Spaceballs Joan Rivers was the actress that voiced
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  • From moodysavage on May 22, 2012
    whoo hoo!!! I just read all of this this morning and I really really find it fun to read! I laughed over quite a bit of it. You are really good with the quick and fun dialogue. Can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - Susan on May 21, 2012
    This one is from Space Balls, another of my favorite movies. The line was said by Dot Matrix, Princess Vespa's robot-in-waiting or whatever. I believe the voice was done by Joan Rivers.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 21, 2012
    Spaceballs!!! I love that Mel Brooks movie. :-D Skips around happily dancing...

    Ahem...

    This chapter was so much fun. I LOVE seeing Lucius humbled by simple courtesy. Snort! Draco's horror at her threat made me laugh out loud. And, Severus' teasing was PERFECT. Thank you for the smile and laugh before bed. Nighty night! HG4eva
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  • From goldhorse on May 21, 2012
    Yay. I like this game. That line was voiced by Dot Matrix, a golden robot played by Joan Rivers in the movie Space Balls that was directed by Mel Brooks. It's one of my favorites, actually.

    I have a request... more Sev/Hermione action! And I'm dying to know what happened to Hermione. Pweeeze tell me?
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