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Reviews for Adjustment

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From witchweaver on May 21, 2012
    Spaceballs! Dot Matrix... ;-) again great chapter..
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  • From Hardygirl133 on May 21, 2012
    Ahhh!!! The Fifth Element!!!
    director Luc Besson
    mrs. Dallas ( who is Corbin Dallas ie Bruce Willis mother) to the president/assistant =D

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  • From ANON - LydiaLovegood on May 20, 2012
    Loving this story so far! And that quote is from The Fifth Element, it was the mother of Bruce Willis' character, Korben Dallas. :) Milla Jovovich, who rocks my face off, is also in it! Love her. And of course, the incomparable Gary Oldman!! woo hoo! Okay, back to your story, great, cannot wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Amber on May 20, 2012
    I love this and I hope there is more soon and I like that Ginny isn't a brat hope there is more soon
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  • From ANON - colao on May 20, 2012
    I have no suggestions for improvement, I'm enjoying it as it is
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  • From SailorSol on May 20, 2012
    If I haven't said before, this is a well done story with an under-used theme. As for your chapter 7 famous last words, one of my favorite movies, The Fifth Element.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on May 20, 2012
    Another great chapter. Glad Lucius is finally coming to grips with his trauma! (and really glad Severus & Hermione have begun getting together! woo!)

    This chapter's quote is from Luc Besson's 1997 sci-fi action epic, The Fifth Element (or Fifth Elephant, as we call it in my house... lol) The line was spoken by the annoying mother of Korbin Dallas (Bruce Willis) while she was on the phone with President Lindberg (Tiny Lister). Fifth Elephant is another one of those uber-quotable movies that is part of the lexicon of our family to this day. "Mool-ti-pass!" "They know its a multipass!" ;-)
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  • From ANON - Irisheather on May 20, 2012
    Dear mariteri: You write excellently, still doing well, I love the couple Severus / Hermione is my favorite and I appreciate that you put into this fic, loving each other as should be, maybe you could join them forever.
    Could Lucio give jealousy to Severus and hereby make fall in love deeply and truly of Mione? It's just a suggestion.
    I will keep your fic but please do not take too long to update. A big hug. Hasta la vista baby.
    P:S: (Tell me, which movie comes this sentence!, It is my primary language).


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  • From SirSevMalfoy on May 20, 2012
    The movie was The Fifth Element and the sons name was Korben Dallas played by Bruce Willis.....Love your stories by the way and cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ChaosLady on May 20, 2012
    The chapter was excellent. Poor Lucius! Now for the movie quote, 'The Fifth Element', Corbin Dallas' mother. Gary Oldman played a villian in that movie too(he played Sirius Black in the Harry Potter movies)
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  • From ANON - Kaida on May 20, 2012
    Korben = Corbin
    Sorry. I'm hungarian, and in my language it's writen/said like "Korben".
    (Also: Sorry for my english, if it's not good. As I just wrote, I'm hungarian.)
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  • From ANON - Kaida on May 20, 2012
    Poor Lucius :( But he's not alone. Next! Next! Next! I love the story!

    To the game (it was easy, one of my favorite):
    The fifth element: Korben Dallas's mother's words. Director/Writer: Luc Besson. By the way, as far as I know, the voice is Jill Mullan's
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  • From ANON - ohm on May 20, 2012
    the quote was from corbin dallas's mom in the fifth element
    just noticed this fic and was pleased that you had a new oen going! its quite lovely thus far i think hermione's hearing aid was quite a unique thing to add as an effect of the torture definatly gives her a bit of understanding with lucius
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  • From ANON - lukymiko on May 20, 2012
    Love your stories and I am looking forward to see how this one is going to end. The movie was The Fifth Element and the character was Mrs Dallas, Korben Dallas's mother. Love that movie, its always great for a laugh.
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  • From ANON - genesismom on May 20, 2012
    i believe that it is fifth element korbin dallas's mother and it was directed by luc besson. gosh i hope i'm right. i really loved the song lines game you used to play and the movie lines game is just as much fun.
    love the story. even though i always want hermione and snape together, i also have a soft spot for lucius. thanks for the great story

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