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By : evil-minded
  • From bloodshound on October 20, 2012
    with the answer column, i think the idea is you answer our reviews there rather than at the bottom of your chappies but what ever works best for you.
    wow, the rest of the school seems to be effected even worst than those in lock down. I hope they don't give up on them. the trapped are going to be horribly weak when they're freed at last.
    I surprised that the wizards know so much about nutrition stuff considering how backward they are with most of the rest of muggle style sciences. I'm equally surprised that ron wants in, but i guess there's not much else to do and they do need those potions.
    heh, that was a valuable lesson in trust. it's sad that the slyths can trust their head of house much more than the gryffs can and do.
    well, that's one way to bond with the students.
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  • From Morrigayne on October 20, 2012
    Ok..sorry..I love your story and please don
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  • From JeanMcIory on October 08, 2012
    the stupididy of reporters, I think, they're not different from reporters in the muggle world or our real world, you dealt nicely with the outside view on the Tragedy Of Hogwarts
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  • From JeanMcIory on October 08, 2012
    that was so cute, Severus allowing Harry to blame him and to accuse him, he never would have done so in canon, I love your view on this all
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  • From SteveSettler on October 08, 2012
    funny game, I'm over and over again amazed at how you come up with such ideas
    it was another great chapter to a great story
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  • From SteveSettler on October 08, 2012
    I hink it's necessary, that Severus set some groud rules, even if the students didn't like them and I think it was important that he told about Harry's and Theo's nightmares too, there's nothing bad about nightmares
    great chapter to a great story, again, on to the next chapter
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  • From bloodshound on October 04, 2012
    Okay, side question first. why do you have an answer column in the forums if you're not using it. Have not many people been reviewing or something... if so, that's a pity.

    I'm glad only theo and har heard that interview. They both appear to have an inner stoicism that allows them to take it with a grain of salt. I doubt the rest of the students would have coped as well.

    two weeks sounds survivable, especially as snape will be doing his level best to keep them alive down there. hmmm, but they'll be down there for nearly three weeks. I wonder if there is an equivalent to an induced coma potion or a stasis potion. They're really not going to be up for much by the end of week three.

    Well, that interview answered my questions on the bodily function side of things. The have enough to keep themselves clean and hygienic down there... as long as no girl gets her period and aside from the fact they can't wash their clothes.

    I wonder how long it will take before they can call each other by name easily.

    poor har, lots of guys keep a journal... and in high school they made us all keep diaries so that we would at least know when our homework was due.
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  • From ANON - unneeded on September 21, 2012
    Well, that's the ground work and rules laid. lets hope they make some difference. I think, when this is over, this particular class isn't going to be able to handle going down into the dungeons again... not without serious therapy anyway. I wonder if some odd pairs will form. they often do in a lock in situation though i doubt they can do anything about said attraction. Wash water and privacy will probably be in short ish supply and i wouldn't want to do physical exploring without either.
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  • From ANON - Saphirephoenix on September 21, 2012
    I am enjoying your fics very much. I adore how you make Snape symphathetic without losing the snarkiness that partially defines him. You portray the victims of child abuse and their reactions very well. English may be your second language, but you wouldn't know it from your writing.
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  • From SteveSettler on September 20, 2012
    I'm glad that Severus starts to re-think a few things about Harry, and I'm glad that he starts to even be a bit less formal with the students, the closer they get, the better will be their chances of survival, still love the story
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  • From JeanMcIory on September 20, 2012
    you know, it's sad that a child feels the need to hide any injuries and someone should go and visit the Dursleys, have them suffering the way Harry had suffered, I'd have a few very nice ideas, evil, wanna know them?
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  • From JeanMcIory on August 23, 2012
    I just wanted to ask? Isn't this the title of one of your stories? great choice of chapter title and I'm still glad that you're doing this fic here too
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  • From JeanMcIory on August 23, 2012
    I just wanted to ask? Isn't this the title of one of your stories? great choice of chapter title and I'm still glad that you're doing this fic here too
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  • From SteveSettler on August 23, 2012
    huh? somehow this didn't work, giving a review. well, I'll give it again
    I was just about telling you that it took Snape pretty long to discover things about Harry, that it was pretty time to finally start seeing that there was more to Harry's person

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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 19, 2012
    Please, please, PLEASE. CONTINUE THIS!!! I have not read a.more.orrigional.story in a while. I really.am enjoying this plot, it is so different from anything else I've read. I love that the charactera are staying pretty true t o themselves .
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