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Reviews for All is fair in the game called love

By : Sasunarufan13
  • From ANON - Sharebear on September 11, 2012
    Harry is so clueless! i love it! lol
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  • From cocobyrd87 on September 11, 2012
    Ooooo I liked this chapter!! Stupid Molly. I hope you post Sirius' and Remus' reply to her next chapter. She really needs a good slap in the face! I LOVED the spell and prank! That was great! Yay, Harry realizes his feelings!! Hopefully he doesn't freak out about it too much ;) Update soon!
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  • From Madamdragon on September 11, 2012
    Whoooooo!!!! Harry had his revelation!!!! WHOOT!!! I hope they don't beat around the bush and get to being a couple soon before the holiday ends. Please!!! Update again soon cuz, I don't think I can wait. No I KNOW I can't wait. PUH-LEEEEAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!!!
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  • From kadajclone on September 11, 2012
    Very nice chapter but holy hell i was going through the reviews and i noticed ALOT of hate for Ginny lol granted her attitude in this story is........grating to say the least she hasn't really done anything terribly bad yet beyond obsess over harry....and who wouldn't...i mean look at him he's gorgeous, it doesn't make her bad it makes her smart(stole a little bit of that line from venture brothers btw). While in canon she is a very reasonable and likeable character, now ron on the other hand....now that guy has ALWAYS really rustled my jimmies both in canon and fanon so i don't feel much in the way of pity for him here. In fact from what i have seen harry(and possibly Hermione when she gets her act together and stops being a tool and a couple of other people) are the only non inherently dickish people in this story lol the "protagonists" in this story are at best jerkasses with the occasional softer sides while the antagonists just happen to be much worse. A few designated villains and heroes as well. Harry is just kinda stuck in the middle of it all lol. This is still a very nice story and sorry again if i come off as "that guy" who has to make reviews talking about the moral ambiguity of a story on ADULT fan fiction.net. This is in no way a flame, just simply the opinion of a humble reader.


    Waits patiently for next chapter.
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  • From ArienAngel529 on September 10, 2012
    Poor Harry getting hurt. But at least he beat Ginny! Oh how she irritates me. Please tell me someone teaches her a lesson. And Dumbledore is getting on my last nerve using custody of Harry to hold over Sirius and Remus. Are you working on the sequel or is it done? I can't wait for more. This is such a good story, and it's all about my three favorite pairings.
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  • From ArienAngel529 on September 10, 2012
    Draco is so sweet to Harry! I love it. I was waiting for when they'd sleep together again, it's so cute.
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  • From ArienAngel529 on September 08, 2012
    Awesome choices of students to switch! Pansy seriously irritates me too lol
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  • From ArienAngel529 on September 08, 2012
    Not sure about the spells but no one really knows Latin anyways so it's cool. Glad to see some Remus/sirius chemistry. Can't wait for more. I like how it's progressing Harry and Draco. I would have loved to read Draco screaming at Ginny. I hate her a lot haha. Still some grammar errors. You need a beta whose first language is English. If you want I can send you corrections for the ones I notice.
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  • From bloodshound on September 08, 2012
    poor confused Har... despite the fact that it's obvious his godfathers are together, he still has clicked to the fact that it's okay for him to be bi... or gay. The Dursleys did a hell've a lot of damage to his self esteem and it's going to take time to build that up again. Draco's off to a good start with it but har will still have wobbley moments and confused moments and heavily self doubting moments... and feel he needs to prove himself, hence almost killing him self in the Quidditch game.
    Interesting... I wonder what Sal Slyth's introduction will lead to.
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  • From ANON - Sincerely on September 08, 2012
    Your story has pulled me in. I do hope you update it soon. I really love the relationships you have going, especially the one between Harry and Draco. I almost wish you make Ron and Hermione apologize to Harry, though, or maybe just Ron because he seems the lesser of two evils in this story. Anyways, keep it up! Looking forward to your updates, Melissa
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  • From Madamdragon on September 07, 2012
    Ok so Harry is confused. Understandable, but he better figure it out. Quick. Cuz I'm not that patient. So good update. I'm on the edge of my seat as always. With you updates. I might as well be. BTW do have FB??? could you friend me if possible?
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  • From cocobyrd87 on September 07, 2012
    Great chapter! Awww Harry is slowly (VERY) slowly starting to realize his feelings for Draco! Even if he's confused :) I like the addition of Salazar, I'm very interested in seeing where that goes! Update soon!
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  • From gossipgirl84 on September 07, 2012
    I don't know if you realized in the first chapter, that you made a few last names mistakes, Parks it's Parkinsons and Grabbe is supposed to be Crabbe. Just saying, if you didn't already know.
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  • From ArienAngel529 on September 07, 2012
    There is a lot of incorrect grammar throughout all the chapters. Regardless, I love the story. The twins are perfect. They had me cracking up. I can't wait to see how the chemistry between Harry and Draco unfolds.
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  • From cocobyrd87 on September 05, 2012
    Yay! Great chapter! Oh okay, how's about just severely maiming him? Maybe Ron and Hermione too? ;) That ending was hot! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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