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Reviews for Freedom In Chains

By : TaintedSensibly
  • From ANON - Mary on July 18, 2012
    Nononononononononononononononononononono. And now I will try to give a reason. I truly don't think making Laine a werewolf will do the story or Laine any good. It will just be another way he has been screwed over. Laine already acts so much like a werewolf when he is fighting - he is fearless, vicious, ruthless, and extremely strong. And I don't know if becoming a werewolf would work for Laine. I feel like if he were to be bitten his personality would over power the beast and in a fight I feel like Laine would win between him and Remus. I feel like it is more of a likely-hood that Tonks will become the werewolf in her effort to stop Laine from injuring/killing Remus.
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  • From nique.c on July 15, 2012
    oh gosh I remember reading this when it was still on fan fiction, I was sad to see it unfinished . I like the changes, while at the same time I like the things you kept. cant wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on July 13, 2012
    yes the wizarding world would change since voldimort would likely be sending more and more deatheaters as time went on and those deatheaters would be higher and higher ranked as more time passed. the way i see it voldimort only had about a dozen deatheaters when he returned an at least half of those would be in america. the other deatheaters would be out hunting down new recruites an as time went on those better trained deatheaters would be sent on the hunt for harry potter thereby only leaving the less trained deatheaters who have to rely on fear to win fights because they are not well trained.
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  • From Jan on July 11, 2012
    Oh, this story is... well there is no words to describe how much I love this story nor how good it is...

    Though I will say that I hate Gloria... or strongly dislike her(I'll decide in later chapters, see if she changes bitchy personality a bit)

    I can't even begin to imagine Severus pain knowing that Harry really is James son...

    Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^

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  • From Hollibell on July 10, 2012
    And I'm all caught up. *pouts* Ok. God, how sad for Severus. I was bothered by his rationalization to how Harry was his son, yet looked like James and was born so late, and now we learn the truth. I'm trying not to be mad at Lily, as a mother I know we will do anything to protect them, but Damn! That's so hard on Severus.

    As to their bond, more is revealed with each chapter. The damage from their upbringing created their need for each other. I'm anxious to see what else will be revealed through Severus' dreams. Hale needs Laine to protect him and keep him safe. Laine needs Hale to ground him, keep him from going too far at times. It seems this relationship is very permanent, and magic has stepped in and created a true bond. You are doing a great job, I think, in revealing their relationship. It may be squicky to some, because technically they are brothers, but they grew up not knowing that, so it is what it is. If you're worried Laine may be coming off too controlling or something, he's not. It's plain Hale needs that from him. I love this story so far. As I've never read it as BSoP, I'm curious how much it has differed....
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  • From Hollibell on July 10, 2012
    I had a feeling about Linc. It's kinda cool to see that I was right. Oh, these poor boys!
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  • From Hollibell on July 10, 2012
    I was wondering how it was that Harry was Severus' son but looked like James. Oh and obviously the boys are something more to each other. So sad!
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  • From Hollibell on July 10, 2012
    Wow. Just, wow. I love your writing. BMFS and its sequels are one of my favorite series and I'll admit that I've wanted to read BSoP but didn't because you had to discontinue it. I am very excited that you're writing it again. This prologue is really amazing. That last flight scene was intense. I'm glad there are more chapters up, I can't wait to read more and will no doubt be pouting when I reach the last update.
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  • From TalisRuadair on July 10, 2012
    So they are only half brothers, but still closely related. I understand that Harry has to feel useful, however him not having the ability to use the brother wand to Voldemort may interfere with the prophecy. Then again Lane will not allow anything to happen to Harry, so he will make sure that the Dark Lord dies. I cannot help but wonder what you're planning on doing with the fact that Harry's a bloody Horcrux.
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  • From ANON - fudge on July 10, 2012
    LOVE this story!
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  • From ANON - Shameless on July 09, 2012
    It's been a while since I've been on AFF, but I was sure I logged in o.o Oh well.
    This story is absolutely gorgeous. I love Laine and Harry together
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  • From TalisRuadair on June 27, 2012
    Ah if Laine had the same dreams as Snape, I'm sure we'll have a very angry dom on our hands. I cannot wait to see his reaction because he'll know what Snape saw. He's filled with hate, isn't he? I really hope he doesn't run off with Harry. That's something horrible for him to suffer through at such a young age.
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  • From makoslits on June 27, 2012
    I really love your story! I love how Laine and Harry protect each other. Their relationship is beautiful eventhough they're brothers. I hope to know more about their past. Especially harry's. I feel so bad for snape. Hopefully he can reunite with his sons. Keep up the great work and update soon.
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  • From TalisRuadair on June 25, 2012
    I think this is an interesting concept. I think it's well written and the concepts are believable. However, I have to admit that I have not fully looked into the psychological components to dom/sub relationships. I can understand how one could develop as a coping mechanism for excessive trauma at a young age, which is both of your characters seems to have experienced.
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  • From Leowardelf on June 23, 2012
    Hi there,
    I like what this story is doing and these are lovely long chapters!
    Although the story is so AU it could almost be an original with just a few changes!

    Great story though so far and I will definitely keep an eye out for updates. Keep up the writing!
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