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By : Massanie

From magentah on October 18, 2013
Agh! I'm grinning like an idiot while I shake my fist at you, Massanie! I'm shaking my fist, of course, because things are messier than before and I'm aching for our boys to be together and happy (however, I know that would also probably mean the end of the story, so.. please keep torturing me!). But, I'm grinning for several reasons: 1) Plot twist becomes twistier! I love that you keep me on my toes as a reader. 2) Yes, more conflict means more things to resolve, means more words to do all of that, means more story for me to read. Yes yes yes. 3) Happy ending! I can be so okay with everything they are and will be going through because I know there will be a happy ending! Thank you for setting my nerves at ease with that.

As for chapter 25, my heart melted a little at what Draco furiously won't acknowledge (even if he can't help but do just that) and the moment he and Harry had. I need to go back and reread the last chapter to remember how the blackmailer/kidnapper is still able to hear Harry outside (?) and to see if they're related to Blaise's uncle and the guardia or if I made that all up in my head. Hardships, having to reread this story. ;) (Totally kidding, I'm truly in love with this. I had never really considered Blaise before and now I can't get enough of these three together!). Thanks so much for sticking with it! Looking forward to the next update. :)
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From Koneko on October 07, 2013
Will you continue? I like the story
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From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2013
This story has potentual, but it needs to be edited. It's difficult to read in places due to the 'unique' grammar. There's also a lot of silly typos that detract from your story.
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From ANON - Lica on October 03, 2013
I trully love your fiction. I just wonder if Harry will remember that any interference in their mat, even if it is the aurors he can persecute the person... And he can't agree with the blackmail, Hermione and Ronald will not agree either... Well I will wait for the next chapter. Kisses
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From helga1967 on October 02, 2013
This chater Is super, the conflict , the realization of the past and promise of a fight.
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From ANON - Kay Draccis on September 23, 2013
Cliff hanger of freaking doom! I'm kinda rooting for Harry to come to his senses, mate Blaise and Draco and then go and kick bad guy butt into the next hemisphere. Cuz we all know that if that doesn't happen then Draco and Blaise are so going to have to kill the bad guy, berate Harry and then when things settle, mate Harry. Can we tell that I'm in love with this story, and Vykelari? It's rather good and I'm looking forward to new chapters as soon as you're better!
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From Jan on September 03, 2013
Please update chapter 24 soon.
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From Kain on September 02, 2013
Well......someone just signed their fucking death warrant, Harry is just going to collect the body. There is a list of things you just don't do, fucking with any member of the trio is at the top of said list. Ya mess with one, then the other 2 will find and end you. Very clever with the whole cant apparate onto a plane thing. Harry's rage at how callous and cruel dominants can be was brilliant and I am curious if that stuff that was dropped into his eyes in the previous chapter is making him more loyal too Blaise and Draco than he would usually be.

It would suck if this was all one big plot by the parents and they set things up so Harry would have to rely on Draco and Blaise to help save his friends and he would feel indebted to them.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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From Mughain on August 26, 2013
OMG! This is one of the most amazing, innovative and original fanfictions I've ever read (and I've read THOUSANDS!) It's just so well written, without being long-winded or boring, and I like how, even though there are hints and snippets of submissive!Harry, he still keeps in character without turning into a puddle of cooing mushiness. It's just great - and you've left it at such an awfully suspenseful cliff-hanger! PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU! This is my new obsession! I can't live without more! DX
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From kadajclone on July 26, 2013
Welcome back, lovely chapter as always.

Whoever kidnapped Harry's friends DOES.NOT.KNOW who they have just fucked with lol. The biggest berserk button on Harry right up their with insulting his parents and some fools were dumb enough to mash it. As the previous article showed, harry is still very much beloved by the wizarding world and anyone who has the stones to screw with his pseudo-family had better be ready to go to war.

-waits patiently for the next chapter and constantly refreshes the review replies page to see if review from last chapter will be touched upon :D.

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From ANON - AR on July 26, 2013
Yea for updates! Glad to see more of this story. Well, it sucks that Hermione wasn't fast enough to escape, but hopefully Blaise and Draco will help 'save the day', as it were. Highly amused by Harry knocking Draco's socks off with that kiss, and Blaise interrupting because he was jealous. [snickers] The black liquid was... a spying potion? But why, is what I'm wondering. Happy writings, and hope RL remains respectful to your writing time! ^__~v
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From Jan on July 23, 2013
The snakes tried to warn them, but the lions just couldn't listen to them could they?

Please update chapter 23 soon.
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From ANON - WorldePARALLEL on July 17, 2013
This fic is completely astounding! Your writing really made it a great read and the pace of the story I thought was just about perfect! I loved it where you made the fluent transition of emotions, turning still-present rivalry to budding interest spurred by both instincts and appreciation for Harry's personality. I have to admit that I was disgusted by Harry's actions and outward expression of his emotions in the last 2 books of the series, where I felt that he was just an ignorant, so full-of-himself brat that was hungry for public attention while making himself look pathetic and forced-into-action, not to mention all the deaths at the end of the final battle. But I simply loved the Harry in this fic, it really brings back the sweet Harry that was seen in the first few books, still impulsive at times, while achieving maturity that he was supposed to have achieved by the end of the original series. Not to mention the wonderful display of all the character's emotions as they dealt with their emotions ;) although until now, I have still failed to pronounce their creature inheritance... Talking about that, could you include what the Italian (or were some French?) meant in A/N or somewhere else, so that we can know what they are thinking or saying? Harry may be happier not knowing what they called him, or thought of him, but I'm really curious...
I love it when Draco and Blaise keep on teasing Harry, he was just SOOO cute, not to mention that the reactions and thoughts the other two had were equally interesting to read. Please do let them continue teasing him, this is going to be so fun! The last chapter I presume is a great indicator to the change in relationship and tension between the three of them? Since Harry became more concerned over their rep and feelings than being kissed against his will by a certain Blaise Zabini... Draco you can't lose out, make your move soon! Of course when the two of you get to share Harry it'll be the best, but it's too early for now isn't it? Though I thought that the article incident may well be a booster to their trust and relationship, will it? *puppy eyes overflowing with anticipation* I keep remembering when Hermoine forced Rita to write an article for them back in Book 5, could they do the same to Crane? Please update soon XD
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From ANON - Darkened Temptations on July 15, 2013
OMG! Please, PlEaSe, PLEASE upload the next chapter! I love your story and am totally addicted. Thanks for posting it and thanks for reading my review! Have an awesome day! :)
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From bloodshound on June 07, 2013
wow, i missed lots. unfortunately my lap top had an accident involving falling and hard wooden floors. >.>
Luc, cissa, amy, you complete and utter bastards... even if they did try and force mate him. i don't think it would help. i think har would suicide before he let himself live like that again.
its fortunate he means more to blaise and draco than that. things are going to get so much more awkward from here on out, as if this courtship wasn't already super awkward. still, har and his prospective mates have the rest of the golden trio at their back now, so that should help.
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