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From kadajclone on May 14, 2013
To piggy back off of my last review, is there any chance...even the slight possibility that you could write an AU fic of this but featuring perhaps a Dominate Pansy/Sub Hermione Vyk
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From kadajclone on May 14, 2013
Oh boy,

"Then, to Harry's dismay, his friend cocked her head, sending the long locks of nut brown hair flying, before she said "I especially liked the part where she said how purebloods were trampling over the rights of everyone else... or was that the Mediwizard?"
A snarky smile worthy of a Slytherin curled her lips as a bark of laughter bubbled out of Ron. She was teasing, Harry knew that, but she was also and more importantly testing the men who held the future of one of her best friends in their clawed hands.

hehe Love it when Hermione's inner lioness decides to bare its fangs.

Hot damn there was sooo much sass going around in this chapter lol.

"Where's the honour in that?"

"Where's the honour in losing?" Draco asked back.

"Of course a Slytherin would say something like that."

"Guys!" Harry called out in helpless exasperation. "Could you please just try to get along? Or pretend to?"

I can just imagine Harry's "oh for fucks sakes you guys" face while this is happening.

I may have already mentioned it in a previous review but what I enjoy most about your story is how you manage to keep everyone in character while giving them some good development and how everyone is on par with everyone else. Allow me to explain, A LOT of "any slythern"/Harry pairing fics have the very bad habit of portraying Slytherins as the top dogs physically and intellectually and having them be jerk sues who rarely ever get whats coming to them and everyone else is given the "Ron the death eater" treatment(for further info on that go to http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RonTheDeathEater). Was sets your story apart is how you give the Slytherin's flaws that Harry calls them out on and doesn't just forgive them because they look deeply into his eyes all smoldering like or some shit. Here you have Hermione going toe to toe with some politically savy silver tonged devils and managing to score some hits, hell even Ron manages to trump them now and again.

On another note Harry must be feeling really jipped by Narcissa right now. He is the sole reason she is not facing a trial right now and she turns and around and is making plans to screw him over. And I understand that Harry has a massive case of chronic hero syndrome and fully believes in Dumbledore's whole "everyone deserves a second chance" philosophy but good god.... the elder Malfoys have had Several chances to change who they are and keep making the same mistakes. Speaking of which I may have asked this before ........but did Lucius ever serve his full sentence from the first time he was arrested and exposed as a WILLING death eater and liar after the battle in the department of mysteries? You would think that after that a trial wouldn't even be happening and he would be sent right back to Azkaban with even more years added to his time. You would think that a guy with such a strong sense of justice would be a little more vexed that a man who once tried to kill him and his friends just might slip through the cracks. I just hope his feelings towards Draco and Blaise aren't influencing slight double standard.

It sucks seeing Draco so torn about it and we as the readers can see that he owes his parents jack shit. Ya really get the sense that Draco would have been a vastly different and better person had his parents given up the whole pure blood supremacy crap. I mean I don't even want to begin to imagine what school life will be like for him now that Slytherin does not have the same clout they did before the war and after a year in a death eater controlled school where Slytherins were probably the top of the food chain ya just know they will have to be watching there backs, especially Pansy. That haughty attitude of hers is gonna rub people the wrong way and there were quite a few witnesses to her attempt to sell out Harry lol.

Seeing as how Harry's friends have to go into hiding for the time being will Miss Crane perhaps have to go into hiding as well? Her ass probably has many people targeting it and it would be the perfect chance for her to see that Draco and Blaise aren't abusing Harry and it may reveal any ulterior motives she may have against pure bloods. Not that I can blame her....a majority of the pure blood families have shown to be a very infuriating blend of amoral douche lol.

and last but not least, this has been on my mind for a while and it has nothing to do with my review....but are there any Dominate female/sub female Vyk
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From ANON - darkroses on May 03, 2013
This was a really good chapter I was so excited when I saw the update. I was thrilled to see that Severus isn't going to go along with Lucius and the others but I hope Harry finds a way to use that article to gain rights for himself and future submissives as well as protect Blaize and Draco from the backlash. After all there is a very good chance that his children could be submissive like him and they might not be so lucky to find mates who treat them as well as Draco and Blaize are treating Harry or give them the same freedom. And by not gaining submissive rights he is leaving himself vulnerable since he will have no rights or freedoms other than what his mates give him and by law everything he owns belongs to his mates even his future children. I can't see Harry being happy with that hanging over his and his children's heads even if Blaize and Draco treat him like an equal. Anyway I'm really looking forward to the next update.
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From ANON - emma elizabeth pressnell on April 24, 2013
This is in one word BRILLANT !!!!! I can not wait to read what happens next !!!
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From Jan on April 18, 2013
A very interesting story, can't wait for chapter 20 ^_^
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From dark-huntressmoony on April 15, 2013
So i started reading this just out of curiosity because i absolutely love creature fics and submissive Harry not to mention that hardly anyone uses Blaise which is really sad and i have to say i am very pleasantly surprised by what i have read. The story is beautifully written and carries itself as if this could be just another chapter in the life of Harry Potter, a good background and it has enough thought behind it to keep the story going and interesting. I really cant wait for more.
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From ANON - mnfm on April 14, 2013
This chapter is one of my favorites. Please update soon!
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From WolfPup5683 on March 19, 2013
can't wait for the next chappy. bravo
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From ANON - kelsin on March 18, 2013
I just discovered this story and I absolutely love it!! So far, its one of the best Harry/Draco/Blaise stories I've read....and I've been reading in this fandom for years. Its very hard to find multi-chapter stories with this threesome that are both written well and don't make the characters so OOC that you forget who they are! You have managed to do both! I applaud you for that. I truly hope that you continue/complete this story. It really is a work of art. I can practically see it all happening as I read it...a skill very few authors have managed with me. Again, well done to you. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next part! :-)
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From ANON - korolo on March 16, 2013
First me start off by saying that I absolutely love this story. It's seriously one of my favorite fics found in years of browsing the fandom. But it's kinds weird how Harry didn't seem to realize/care what a great thing changing these laws would be for other submissives. I guess he's more concerned about Draco and Blaise but it's still weird. Plus Draco and Blaise are going to be demonized by the press either way, so I'm curious about what's going to happen next.
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From HeavenScent on March 12, 2013
Ooh, yes, I did enjoy it! The plot thickens...would love to see some advancement in the intimacy between Harry and the snakes! :) Surely Draco deserves a kiss too...?

HS
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From bloodshound on March 09, 2013
sorry for the lack of review lately. i've been fighting my internet... and losing. >.>

well, that isn't half awkward... at all. >>
still, har's been there for what three, four days? And there hasn't been an active threat to his life. is that long enough to develop Stockholm's? once they found out his background, they've been bending over backwards to try and treat har well.
pansy is a bit scary.
i know ron and mio mean well, but they don't know enough about the sitch to really judge.
the interview by mirror, infact the whole mirror set up is a terrific idea though, so well do the slyth boys.
i hope hars interview by mirror helps.

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From kadajclone on March 08, 2013
Well first things first. That Vyk
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From ANON - heartstar on March 08, 2013
wow nice I can't wait more please blaise and draco are gonna be pissed!
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From ANON - roxie on February 28, 2013
Hi, I loved it and hope you update soon.
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