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Reviews for The Forever Game

By : uqui
  • From bloodshound on September 03, 2012
    Blinks..., damn, missed a chappie. oh, well. You're right. the added sceens would have detracted from the flow of the story but I'm glad we got to read them anyway as they do add a bit of spice.

    Well, booooooo. so, hang on, how does that work? So har just stays over at hogworts for the testing period? did he ever go full time? Was he sorted and do his younger sibs do the same? It mentioned a bro in third year yeah?

    His poor parents. how long will they remain dumble pawned? It sounds like his da isn't unreasonable, just heavily controlled and possibly his ma too.

    Most interesting. so whose doping har, for what reason and for whom? Does this mean Dumbles has a hint of har's true mate? Or is he just doing his usual, ppl's life as pawns, forward planning and plotting? Still, even dumble pawned I'm glad they can tell just how much V loves mate.
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  • From Jan on September 02, 2012
    Please update chapter 13 soon ^_^
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  • From savannah19742001 on September 02, 2012
    Good chapter, are you going to get into what the Dark Lord does and finds out about what has been done to Harry's parents?
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  • From djaddict on September 02, 2012
    I love all these little tidbits - must have more!
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  • From ANON - Miri Daray on August 31, 2012
    Once again great as always! I always enjoy how fast you update (thanks for that :) )
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  • From ANON - Annabelsmith on August 30, 2012
    Hi jade,

    Quick question :you mention that Harry is in Hogwarts and then at the end it says that he was homeschooled? Can you please clear that up?
    Great story by the by I am sorry to have missed the guessing game as I founnd this story today itself.
    Keep up the good work!
    Cheers!
    anna
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  • From disgruntledfairy on August 29, 2012
    I loved this chapter the most! The bonus material was awesome! Thank you very much for that scene; it made me laugh. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Miri Daray on August 29, 2012
    Can't believe I forgot Barty Crouch Jr... oh well.. hope the last 1/4 of the cookie tasted good!
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  • From bloodshound on August 28, 2012
    yay! previews *settles in with popcorn.
    yeah, that sounds like something dumbles would do, trying bend things in favour of 'the chosen one'. I surprised he managed to get Oli to bend his neck enough to agree though. I mean giving a kid an ill fitting wand like that. You can be sure he'll be called to account for that later. I dun think V is one to let a slight towards his mate slide. Nice to Malfoy JR is running true to form. :P
    Can't see har being buddy buddy with either Red or Silver. I hope he does still make friends with Mio though.
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  • From Jan on August 28, 2012
    Please update chapter 11 soon.
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  • From savannah19742001 on August 27, 2012
    Great chapter and i love the back story...can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Foxfyre99 on August 26, 2012
    Well, first off, I love this story! Second, my guess as to the 4 dead Death Eaters is Bellatrix, Rodolphus,and Rabastan Lestrange, and their good buddy Barty Crouch Jr. It seems apropos since they liked to torture together. Keep it up, and I can't wait for the big finish to Weapon!
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  • From ANON - Archon on August 24, 2012
    Love your work. Very original and detailed.
    I think voldeys an incubus.
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  • From ANON - Miri Daray on August 24, 2012
    Bellatrix, the Lestrange brothers and Lucius Malfoy
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  • From bloodshound on August 24, 2012
    oh, nice, you even included a back to the fic link at the bottom of the review page. ^^
    Cambion, yeah, that makes sense. Though i would never have picked Riddle Sr as an incubus.

    Heeeee, har and V, are very physical in their demonstrations of love aren't they. Or is that only in private? Do those in know get to see any PDA's or is strictly restricted to the bedroom for the moment?

    Oh Sev, poor, poor man. At least he was true to the end, even if she never loved him that way. Thus the last of the Prince line falls. Did he name an heir? I hope har finds his book, he deserves some legacy to continue.

    As for those who get dead... well, i suppose mafia wives etc have a similar response. They probably know what their husbands do, they just choose not to think about it.

    Still, i don't blame har for feeling nothing as those who hurt his mother got dead. Is it his bit of Voldi Soul that desensitizes him or that justice has been served? I thought most of V's more rabid followers had been purged? I would have thought Bell Bell, her boys and Fen would be in that group.

    Hopefully, har's effect on V should keep the blood baths to a minimum.
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