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Reviews for Corvus

By : LadyFreak
  • From ANON - wirra on December 12, 2012
    Oh I'm so glad you updated. I was starting to worry. Corvus is such a Slytherin when dealing with Dumbles, love it. I was hoping that Flitwick would have a bigger role in Corvus' Hogwarts life but I'm sure you have plans. Can't wait to find out whether Hermione will be around. Great work
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  • From ANON - Tierra on December 12, 2012
    I like the way you are doing your story. Corvus finally getting fed up didnt seem out of character. I was really surprised he put up with it for so long even though he is such an introvert and was getting no help. I love this story. It is fun to read and it flows really well. If you need a beta I wouldn't mind looking over your story. I've never betad before but I am an english major so I could be of some help if you'd like. Just shoot me an email if you want me too.
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  • From demonsangel on December 11, 2012
    Yes! More! Finally! lol. Hi, glad you are back! I love this story soo much. Glad to see Corvus is making friends finally and that he got to one up Potter and Dumbles. I can not wait to read more! You're story is amazing hun. *hugs*
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  • From cocobyrd87 on December 11, 2012
    Oooo Corvus is going to stir up some trouble upon entering Hogwarts, isn't he? Great chapter!
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  • From Cinder1013 on November 05, 2012
    I like this chapter. It has nice setup and McGonagle is not out of character yet, but if she actually sees Potter hex Corvus and does nothing, she'd be OOC, IMHO. However if she sees Potter hex Corvus and Corvus complains, her giving them both detention is totally within character. After all, she did it to Draco in book 1.
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  • From dominique1 on November 04, 2012
    McGonagall is a bitch in need to be s pended from her job corvus needs help but hes had a rough life until he was adopted i kind of hope that mc bitch pays
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  • From demonsangel on November 02, 2012
    Good chapter. I had a "duh" moment where I got really confused lol. When I read Charlie, I thought Weasley and was like, why is he pushing Corvus? o.O lol Damn you Dumbledore! Leave Sev alone! In answer to your question, I would have to agree, McGonnagal is a bit too ooc. I mean, even in the books she was still at least fair. What she is doing goes against her job as a teacher though. Looking forward to more!
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  • From dominique1 on October 30, 2012
    i kind of wish McGonagall get slap down but if she does severus will so fuck her i so hope that corvus shows them all in they learn the truth once he is grown up that would be so cool also love his bond mates but i do hope that the chamber of secret don't happen that corvus finds away around it in that severus in corvus as well as the malfoys get money from it only i would also like to see the potter brat get outed
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  • From dominique1 on October 30, 2012
    i just want corvus to get threw the first five years before he can leave i also hope that the know it all suffer as well
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  • From dominique1 on October 30, 2012
    go corvus so loving this loved how he handle nev that was smooth but the best was the end
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  • From silvertide on October 28, 2012
    I love this story. I can't wait to see Corvus eventual revenge. Please let them learn that Harry is the boy shoo lived and that he died.
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on October 27, 2012
    Excellent I got caught up from Chapter 12 to 16 after getting back from a conference and thoroughly enjoyed the direction and methods you are using. I could not use work devices to visit some of my favorite sites and keep up with my favorite stories :(

    Back to Corvus... McGonagall has always seemed blind to what her Lions are and do... so far you have not taken her too out of character. But, I am looking forward to what other blatant favoritism behavior you're going to have her display and love the thought of what a comeuppance she'll received. I can see (or so I believe) the foreshadowing you are laying for when Slytherin's snake makes an appearance in Chapter 16 with the board of governors and Dumbles and some of the possible headaches and heartaches for Corvus. Please continue to give us your wonder plot twists anytime you want and every chapter is welcome whether small or large.
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  • From Jan on October 27, 2012
    LOL! But of course Severus don't laughs, can't wait to see what happens next so please update chapter 17 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - asiacheetah on October 26, 2012
    I don't know if I reviewed before, but I'm really enjoying this fic. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on October 26, 2012
    I'm really enjoying your story it's very well written! I also love the way it flows! Can't wait till the next update!
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