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Reviews for Corvus

By : LadyFreak
  • From demonsangel on October 26, 2012
    Good? It sounded great. You were able to make something up yourself and have it still sound logical. Many can not do that. Now, as to the latest three chapters. Amazing as always. Only one mistake that I could tell as I was writing. When the Lestrange family went to the station and Cor's raven flew around, you wrote down twice that he flew before landing on his masters shoulder. Each written a different way, but it is still there. Poor Hermione though, I feel that was a bit harsh. It seemed she was just eager to be helpful. I understand that Cor is defensive but its a bit intense. He isn't even giving people a proper chance to explain or apologize. Instead, he is coming off quite arrogant and rude himself. Not a good first impression. Now, pardon me while I smack McGonagal. *wanders off and comes back moments later* Much better. As an animagus that would should be a bit kinder to animals, especially magical ones -.-

    I like that Cor is in Ravenclaw but still trying to divide his time up equally between houses. I can't wait to see what kind of late night conversations may come from him and Rowena's portrait. I do have to wonder though, if given the chance, would Hermione take the opertunity to take the other history class instead of the normal? It seems like something she would do given her "equal rights" and booksmart thing. I could even see McGonagal not telling her it was an option (as if I remember correctly she is the one who talks to muggleborns and their family) as a way to further influence people.

    Anyways, great chapters. Looking forward to more! I hope Cor gets along with Hagrid at least! The man is just too sweet!
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  • From Jan on October 23, 2012
    That was an awesome chappy, love how Corvus got a new wand from someone else, and got accepted to three different school. Just loved it all in all ^_^

    Please update chapter 14 soon.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 21, 2012
    Great chapter! Love Corvus' wand and can't wait to see more of the Headmistress Befana and her school. Sounds super interesting.
    Keep going!
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  • From dominique1 on October 20, 2012
    this is really good love how corvus family love him
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  • From demonsangel on October 19, 2012
    Great chapter, I love the Headmistress. She sounds like she could be a great ally for Corvus later. The wand part was interesting! I love how you took the time to research and create the perfect wand for him. I remember trying to come up with the perfect wand to match my Rae. It is a tricky process and I love that you took the time for it. Thank you for providing the link to your wood source. I may have to use that some time! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - wirra on October 19, 2012
    I love how Corvus doesn't get an Ollivander wand. I always thought the choices were too narrow to be able to accommodate all the people that end up at Hogwarts. I mean there are so many creatures that could contribute and would fit people better. Question- I started reading the story here and found it on ff.net later and got confused when I saw that I was reading different chapters. There is no difference is there, just that you forget to post here? Can
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  • From cocobyrd87 on October 15, 2012
    Of course, jumping to conclusions as always. I can only imagine how the Weasley's and Dumbledore are going to react. Update soon!!
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  • From cocobyrd87 on October 15, 2012
    I like it :) Corvus is going to make his first year one hell of a year, that's for sure! :)
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  • From demonsangel on October 14, 2012
    That is true, Corvus does not like a know it all. Maybe if it was explained that she had no friends and that was really the only time she got attention he would be more accepting but who knows. Course, that is simply my theory on Hermione. Great chapters! I'm glad Corvus gets to get out of Binns class as from what I remember, he only talks about Goblin wars. No wonder kids fail. Boo on Mr. Potter, harassing a child like that. Man should be tossed out of the store on his ass in the most public way possible with someone shouting "until you know how to properly treat a child STAY OUT." Glad everyone is standind up to the Potters. It sounds like people are becoming rather annoyed with their "holier then though" attitudes. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - 917brat on October 14, 2012
    this is soooo brillint and I love how you have things happening plus now Corvus/Harry has somthing that can really tick of the potters and ron. OSmthing to talk about with Bill W I mean the book he's got has got to have somthing both he and the eldest weasely are intrested in. Plus after spending so much time with the goblins and away from his family Bill has got to not be as 'light' as Dumbles and the potter would like. Anyway please keep this up!
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  • From Kayrox133 on October 14, 2012
    Really enjoying the story and just wanted to drop in to tell you. ;)
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on October 14, 2012
    I liked chapter 12 including the inter-action with the Potters in the clothing and book stores. I did get a little lost briefly with one of the sentences "Narcissa spoke Aurors up when they exited the shop,
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  • From dominique1 on October 14, 2012
    just really good
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  • From dominique1 on October 14, 2012
    so good i hope draco could do the samething
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  • From dominique1 on October 13, 2012
    so good corvus will go to hogwart than hope he get to do summer school are something like independent studies i also hope that since lily disown her self that rocks i hope disown all them from his family lines
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