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Reviews for Preventative Measures

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From Jan on May 21, 2013
    I wonder what they are going to find out, please update chapter 10 soon.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on May 21, 2013
    Great fucking story! Totally love it! XD
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  • From ladilyndi on May 19, 2013
    Interesting chapter, new stuff thrown into the mix. It was an interesting dichotomy to see Harry having to make adult decisions about his life while clutching and clinging to Elliot at the same time. A boy who has had to take care of himself and exert control in his life to survive yet the yearning to be comforted and cared for coming through quite loudly. Yet, haven't most, if not all of us been in that position when we wish someone else can make the decisions yet not being able to do so?

    Now, what is under the volcano waiting to erupt? I have my suspicions but, as Severus is doing, look at the hints before saying it out loud. Really good chapter, thanks.
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  • From ANON - AR on May 19, 2013
    This is going to be one of those stories, I can tell, that there's just never going to be enough available to read. ^__^ And... funnily enough, the second Lucius-Sirius I've come across in my recent fic search/scrounge. Completely unintentional.

    So. I'm also picking up more than "simple" neglect towards Harry; more even than a few physical assaults. That, combined with his reaction to Lucius's offer to call him 'uncle', plus his more advanced familiarity and, shall we say 'acceptance' of more "deviant" sexual practices.... leads me to thinking Vernon sexually assaulted Harry, probably more than once. Then turned around and beat him more harshly because of it.

    Nice move of Neville to mention to Harry about getting a solicitor. Makes me wonder what all is different, from first year up, how Harry became aware of his estate and the need of a solicitor, how the triwiz was handled...

    Mostly, though, I'm hankering for some hot, steamy smex. Seriously. Two hot men. One hot teen. Lots of hot, steamy, kinky sex. Oh! and is there possibly something between Remus and Severus? Or will it just be Severus and Draco?

    Looking forward to the next update! Happy writings!
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  • From ANON - reader on May 19, 2013
    another chapter soon this was really too short and this story is really to good.
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  • From Jan on May 13, 2013
    I'm truly intrigued by this story, can't wait for chapter 9 ^_^
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  • From ANON - paganwoman on May 09, 2013
    Good chapter. What I like about this is that it just isn't about the Daddy issue and plans are being made to help him in other ways other than sexual. Putting Remus' comment about the conversations they are having with Harry not being all sexual was good. Although we are reading them it was good to make that clear to others about that. Awaiting the next chapter. Love you Tomato!
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  • From ladilyndi on May 08, 2013
    It keeps getting better and better. I thought I had posted a review of the last chapter but I guess I only composed it in my head. First, I like your take on the Chamber and why the journal was given to Ginny. I also appreciated that Lucius and Harry didn't just jump right in as that would be unrealistic given their past relationship. That it is gradually changing makes more sense. Even in the new chapter, its good that its acknowledged that trust still needs to build. The questions being asked are leading to it without being heavy-handed.

    The only thing that may end up driving me to distraction though is both Sirius and Lucius being called Daddy without any thing else to distinguish the difference and while saying "other daddy" may work now, what will happen when they are all together? It's like having two people with the same name together, when someone calls, no one knows who they want until one is given a distinguishing trait. Then again, usually the distinguishing trait comes out when people are driven to distraction.

    This and "Heroes" are probably my two favorite stories at the minute and I look forward to each and every update. Great work and thanks.
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  • From demonsangel on April 25, 2013
    Great chapter. Honestly, it seems like Harry just wants the things he missed out on as a child, granted, with a more sexual aspect but still.
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  • From BlueOrchid on April 23, 2013
    this story is wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry! the wait is killing me :(
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  • From kristideann on April 19, 2013
    I really enjoy this story I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - starry on April 13, 2013
    Hello speedytomato, I hope your name means you write speedily. Cause I for one would like the rest of the story. Thanks. :D
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  • From ANON - fluffyskittles on April 13, 2013
    This is oddly hot. Huh.
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  • From ANON - cry on April 12, 2013
    I loved it. I have been looking for a story like this for a long time. I love that you put these two adults together.
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  • From ladilyndi on April 12, 2013
    I love an OOC Lucious Malfoy and I want one of those dragons for me! Another great chapter. Another great chapter. I really appreciate the insights into how certain things, such as the dragon and being held, are needs Harry had growing up but were never met. Besides, who wouldn't want to the middle of a Sirius/Lucious sandwich? I look forward to the next Chapter.
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