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Reviews for Preventative Measures

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From ANON - Kireania on April 11, 2013
    Ok so first off I'm gonna fan girl....OMFG I LOVE YOU!! I love this story and all the other ones you have put out (I'm still working through some of your other stories but I love what I have read so far). This is my first review cause I just got through and I couldn't help myself. Usually I'm a very picky reviewer but I just had to gush. I have to admit to never reading this kink before but honestly I LOVE IT and how you write the characters is wonderful.

    My only critique is that when you are doing their "serious" conversations between Remus, Severus, Sirius, and Lucius you tend to have each character repeat everything that was just said just in slightly different wording and phrases; I don't know if this is on purpose or not but that is the only thing I have found myself even lightly cringing towards. But otherwise I love this story very much. I can't wait to read more and be aware that I will be checking everyday for updates.

    Ja ne
    Kireania
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  • From ANON - wolfcathope on April 11, 2013
    Interesting, I can see several ways this is going to blow up. When he does end up at Grimmauld Place how is he going to handle his "friends"? and at school how is Harry, Sirius, Lucius, Severus going to deal with Draco?
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  • From Tesgura on April 03, 2013
    Yay! Smut! I loved it! Harry was such a good boy for Daddy! And I so can't wait to see how things go with Lucius
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  • From ANON - Leslie on April 02, 2013
    OMG i love this story can u send me the updates
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  • From ladilyndi on April 01, 2013
    Really good chapter. I like how the dynamics change from the adult/teen discussing reality and then morphing into the ageplay by changing tone of voice and speaking as if to a child. While the focus has been on Harry's needs, I have to wonder how much Sirius is affect by this as it also allows him to be the "daddy" he should have been to Harry all along. How much will his guilt of not be there for Harry be assuaged by participating in this ageplay with Harry.

    I'm looking forward to seeing Lucius added to the mix as well as seeing if any of those teasers you left us will be satisfied in the next chapter.

    Thanks again for a great chapter. I look forward to the next one.
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  • From ladilyndi on March 27, 2013
    I started reading this with the thought that I would probably not continue as it can be kind of squicky. However, since I so enjoy your writing, I thought to give it a chance. I'm glad I did. I keep going back to the end of Chapter 4. It was so delicately handled, slowly and controlled, so that the reader can feel and understand Harry's emotions in this. You feel his need for what he never had and every child needs and wants.

    Well done and I look forward to more.
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  • From WolfPup5683 on March 20, 2013
    yay harry gets two daddies
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  • From teriwright on March 20, 2013
    wonderful! I look forward to learning more about this good boy kink and can almost feel harry's yearning for care and approval from adults. Poor harry, i hope he's able to not permanently walk the super dark path. let's face it, this harry will always be dark and will have his revenge but hopefully not anything truly evil or unable to pull back from the abyss.
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  • From Tesgura on March 19, 2013
    OMG I love this story so far! The way Sirius brought everything up to Harry was so realistic too, and that was so amazing!
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  • From ANON - suzuki1969 on March 11, 2013
    Hey, although I don't take the time to review (looks down in shame and guilt) I follow your stories and love them!
    Survivor's guilt, And another life begins, this one, If this is how you treat your heroes, yeah, pretty much all of them...
    I have a piece of constructive criticism, and please, PLEASE take it as such, since I'm trying to help and not put down. You use way too much the word "thing" to refer to different... well, things. ;) Don't be afraid of sounding repetitive by using the same words to refer to events, feelings, concepts, facts or simply things. After a while it gets repetitive no matter what and it takes away from the pleasure of enjoying the plot. Same thing with the phrase "and we'll go from there" Every time there is a discussion about plans (and it happens a lot, and in ALL your stories) you use that over and over again. I guess that I pick it up because I read so many of them. Again, please do not feel bad about this and do not listen if you think that's best for you. I'm just trying to help.
    To the actual point of my review now. Why the change of Harry's patronus? Although, I should probably finish reading the chapter, you might explain it later on and I didn't get to that part yet! LOL. It's just that the Stag is such a distinctive part of who Harry is that I couldn't wait to ask!
    Keep on writing, your stories are awesome (even the one that you turned Severus -my all time favorite character-into the bad guy)
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  • From ANON - heartstar on March 10, 2013
    I love that you allowedv them to communicate behind dumbvles back more when you can hun.....
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  • From DrarryPerv on March 10, 2013
    I eagerly await each new chapter. Although some aspects are not necessarily my cuppa (mainly Hermione and Ron both being jerks), there's simply not enough age play in the fandom, let alone well written age play. I'm anxiously waiting for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on March 05, 2013
    more please on this one too please
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  • From jujukitty on February 27, 2013
    as always with your stories, a very intriguing start. i'm interested to see how the pairing starts to evolve and how they manage to get harry under control before he explodes
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  • From ANON - Qtness.Quill on February 26, 2013
    Great start-- I love how well you write! You got me interested by your warnings.... (Is it sad that with as many fics that I've read that the "fetish" of BDSM has become humdrum?) Kinks not usually covered in fanfic I have to check out, and with your writing style, I know you will do it justice. Can't wait for updates!
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