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From ANON - Olivia on November 29, 2015
I cannot wait for the next chapter I love this story!
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From ANON - starr on October 03, 2015
Thank you for the update...well he got the money , can't wait to see the twins with harry , they are good for him... !!!!!! til nest time :):)
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From ANON - autumngold on October 03, 2015
Your new chapter is incredible! I can't believe the fools in the Order actually think that Harry will forgive and forget. Just the fact that they still fool Dumbledore like fools makes them worthless. Thank you for your excellent update! Can't wait for more!
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From ANON - phoenix-rob on October 03, 2015
Loving the story but would really, really really love to see more "daddy" interaction
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From ANON - Rosemae on July 21, 2015
an update HURRRRRYYYYY!!!!!! I love you! And I love this story!!!
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From ANON - starr on July 18, 2015
sp happy to see that harry was ok after the fight with the 3 dumbbells , and yes they all need to say close to Harry since I really don't trust dubblefuck !!!!! Thsnk for the update 1!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - autumngold on July 17, 2015
Fabulous new chapter! I am so glad that Harry's protectors arem't fooled by Dumbledore's manipulations. Thank goodness they are now learning about Dumbledore's plans. Wonderful update! Thank you for your incredible new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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From Chronically_M.E on June 29, 2015
First off, I'll start by saying I'm new to this particular site, and that I came across your wonderful fic during a Google search. Let me tell you, I'm SO SOO glad that I discovered it :) I've NEVER left a review before on ANY fan-fiction sites (I've always been to shy too, to be honest ), but after finishing your fic I just felt, that I had to let you know how VERY much I've enjoyed it (I've read it nearly non-stop over the last 2 days). It's very clear to me that you must be a VERY experienced writer, just by the way you've captured the characters individual voices & personalities SO perfectly, and by the wonderful way you've described everything so vividly (it actually felt like I was there watching everything I was reading play out in-front of me, and I can only speculate that must be due to the very skilful way that this has been written). I have to say that I've been reduced to tears more than once whilst reading your fic. (The horrors that the Harry in your story has had to endure are truly shocking) I'd really like to applaud you for the way that you've handled & written about such a difficult subject as Sexual Abuse so sensitively! As someone that's been a victim of sexual abuse/ assault myself, I can say that the way you've described the terrible after effects that a victim can suffer after such a horrific event, is wholly accurate! I'd also like to add that although this story's had me emotional at times, that there's also many moments/ interactions in the story that have had me laughing out loud :). Harry's stuffed dragon Elliot, in particular, is extremely humorous. I think the way you've written & created his 'character' is pure genius in my opinion :D

Moving on to the Age Play aspects of this story, I have to say, that as someone that's fairly new to this subject, ( & as embarrassing as it is to admit this) It's very much... piqued my interest in this story (& other fan-fictions I've read of late). I feel that it fits in very well with the plot of this particular story (& I can see why after the terrible abuse & childhood that Harry suffered In this fic, that he would maybe be drawn to this particular 'kink'. The chance to relive his childhood again, the right way this time, & to experience being loved & taken care of, I can understand how/ why he's found it comforting. ! I personally can't see it being anything other than a good thing for him, if he's finding comfort from it & its allowing him time to heal)

I like how you've taken the age play aspects to this story slowly, & introduced new things at a rate that Harry's comfortable with.
But ... I hope that you'll maybe keep adding to it, & eventually take it that little bit further, (For Harry to slowly learn to give up a bit more control - once he starts to feel more... 'comfortable' with it all ). My ideas on the subject , relate to the more ... personal, aspects to the age play . Like the diapers for example. Maybe for Harry to eventually learn to use them? (as opposed to just wearing them). I think that the night terrors that he's been experiencing in the lead up to the trial, would give you a good opportunity to start/ lead up to that (Due to the intensity & crippling fear that the night terrors / flashbacks induce, it's very common for unintentional accidents of that kind to occur : as the person isn't fully aware). Another thought I had, is for him to maybe build up to drinking from a bottle (I doesn't necessarily mean it has to be just hot milk) as I was thinking that this could be used as another technique to help him relax & maybe become a form of comfort for him. (maybe before night times, or when he's in the rocking chair being comforted by Sirus & particularly stressed?)

I also wanted to say that I liked the few sexual scenes that you've done in this fic. But ... I especially like the fact that you've made your story SO much more than 'just sex'. I think that we have the plot to thank for that! (an amazingly written one at that) & as such, you've made it so that it's not just not another smut-filled, 'purely sex' fan-fic. Don't get me wrong, the sexual encounters you've written in this are VERY good ( MORE than good in fact, EXTREMELY HOT!). But... I like the fact that because you've allowed the story to build, & given time for the relationship's between the characters to develop - (unlike many other fan-fictions), the few sexual scenes that you do have, the sex seems more ... I dunno, how to explain it... just... better! (not that I'm not secretly hoping that you'll add a few more sexual escapades in to this fic ;) , as Harry's relationship with Sirius & Lucius deepens - and they become more comfortable with each other)

I also wanted to ask you if there's a way of subscribing to the story so that I can get alerts by email when the story's next been updated? (I seriously cannot wait until you update it next, and I get to see the direction that you decide to take it in)

Many thanks again for your fabulous story! It's been a great pleasure to read!

Hannah x
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From ANON - R.L. Foxx on June 02, 2015
:) Sirius is a badass, love it. I feel like something is brewing underneath it all, waiting to blow :) looking forward to more, as well as the trial
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From ANON - starr on May 30, 2015
so happy that Black went off at the 3 assholes !!!! glad they can't go back to the house but like Harry thinks it's not over cause when he goes back to school !!!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!
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From ANON - autumngold on May 29, 2015
Thank goodness Sirius is going to change the wards where Ron, Hermione and Ginny can never come back. Those three have to be the most ungrateful, hard-headed jerks on the planet. They way they keep going after Harry to tell them the story makes them sound like they want to write the story for a newspaper. Thank goodness Harry is away from them, I just hope that he does get his lawyer to press charges against them. Absolutely incredible new chapter! Thank you for your excellent update! Can't wait for more!
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From teriwright on May 29, 2015
I'm certainly happy to see an update to this story but I'll tell you, Harry refusing to discuss his nightmares or get any sort of help is frustrating to read and turns me off his character quite a bit. He's been injured and needs help. Would he just let a broken leg or damaged eye go without treatment? With healers standing right in front of him, ready to help?

I guess it's a kid thing, or a guy thing. I have tremendous sympathy for survivors of rape, but not so much sympathy for those who refuse treatment or help. Is he planning on just wallowing the rest of his life with nightmares, running away from his problems? Yes, he was dealt a shit hand and has to overcome it and that sucks. But, it's not like he's the only one in the world this has happened to. He doesn't have to re-invent the wheel here. There are proven methods for dealing with this shit. Snape brought up just a few of them. I just want to shake Harry and frog march him to therapy, individual or group. I think perhaps he's not competent enough to refuse treatment and his Guardians need to make some firm decisions, even if Harry doesn't like them. That's why they are Guardians. Or maybe his Daddies need to force the issue.

Kudos on Sirius tongue lashing of the Trio. It was quite fun to read! :-) Also kudos for actual punishment and not just words and warning that mean nothing to them.

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From CDGaymer on May 29, 2015
really good chapter. i laughed evilly when George thought "he planned to get with his brother about some revenge on the three".
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From Ria-makoto on April 27, 2015
So far, I've really enjoyed the story. I can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry and update. I really want to continue with this story to the end.
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From ANON - Kat on April 12, 2015
Them three ain't gonna keep to themselves. I just know it.
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