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Reviews for Slightly more perverted "Harry Potter" Reboot

By : Artemis1990
  • From StormiWyndz on March 21, 2015
    I really like what I am reading so far. If you wish, I will proof for you. I enjoy it and I respect you as a fellow author. you can initiate contact here, or at a-gardner1983@live.com
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  • From Drase on March 18, 2015
    Love this story so far, Created an account just to follow it. Been looking around for Harry Potter AU stories after reading another one called harry potter and the methods of rationality...

    I love the perverted angle and want to see more.
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  • From ThunderClaw on March 13, 2015
    Great job keep it up update soon
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  • From ANON - Kial on March 11, 2015
    Hi, I am reading your story and notice it hasn't been proofread, the content and story is good, but the spelling and grammer are pretty bad (no offense), if you want a proof-reader I can do it if you want, just e-mail me the story and I'll correct the mistakes for you.
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  • From ANON - The D on March 09, 2015
    Interesting story so far. So, when will Harry and Hermione will star exploring each other? They are practically alone at the moment with they iperactive imagination and all this hormones working on their bodies.
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  • From Gandalfs-Beard on March 08, 2015
    Haha!:D More Harmony adorableness.

    Poor Harry--it's not easy to tell a girl that you saw her nethers--and that you liked it--at that age (or any age really :P ). Good save by Harry though. Of course poor Harry wouldn't really have any experience with Christmas, and it's nice that Hermione figures that out.

    Well, looking forward to your next update already. I know life intervenes, but is there any chance that you might update a bit more often?
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  • From Xavier843766 on February 13, 2015
    This story is awesome, and i honestly can't wait for the next chapter, and I apologize for my not reviewing until now: As my custom is to review the most recent chapter, and not every single chapter of a story I come across. That said, I like how the pace is slow, but methodical. It's slow, but it truly brings out each character in a way that rushing it wouldn't.
    As to what I do not like, it's the idea that everything is the same ending event: Harry still got detention, and still went into the Forbidden Forest. I don't like it, because it tries to force itself into the same event process as the book. Personally, I would have been more interested into what might have happened had Harry not went into said Forest. That stated, the rest of the story is glorious. I enjoy it very much. Thank you for writing it, and please continue. :)
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  • From ANON - jchangpa on January 15, 2015
    Well as I do not really read any OC Sanpe story specially if it involve Harry or Hermione I have to acknowledge that your view up to here is new and refreshing.
    The story is really good from my bias POV. Hopefully it will continue that way. Just a comment, you do not has to agree with me on it and I hope you do not feel insulted, but try not to add Draco to the circle of friend that will be devastating for me not for your story. Thanks for writing
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  • From ANON - love lee on January 11, 2015
    I HOPE THIS BECOMES A.....Harem
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  • From ANON - mikigreen on January 10, 2015
    Good story love it
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  • From Dan on November 09, 2014
    This story wrote a lot of checks it didn't cash.
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  • From ANON - zach firestone on November 05, 2014
    persionaly I like your story and how its going. your spelling isn't to bad particulary when hagrid is speaking in this chapter, I kinda see him in that light anyway as he well was expelled. harry and hermionie in hufflepuff.... I hate you but it could work.... hermionines wit in this chapter is better suited for ravinclaw. "wit beyond measure is mans greatest treasure" loved it so fay and keep it up.
    zach
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2014
    You need to make another paragraph when someone else starts talking. You instead just keep going and that's not correct. An example of what I mean:

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    Harry stops his snicker but keeps his smile as he approaches the girl and takes a seat across her,
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  • From ANON - anon on November 02, 2014
    I've always wondered about why Harry and Draco were in the forest, nearly alone, with so much danger about. I do hope you'll explore that plot-point, as well as Harry's & Hermione's reactions to that upskirt.
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  • From ANON - SirZic on November 01, 2014
    yey, great story, can't wait to read more,
    Continuuuuuuue,
    Z.
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