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Reviews for Slightly more perverted "Harry Potter" Reboot

By : Artemis1990
  • From ANON - Alex on July 20, 2014
    i have to say that i love your story so far and i can't wait until you start the sex parts ... might i suggest that you don't get Harry and Ron friends and when Harry and Hermione become a couple they're also both open minded and let the 2 Slytherin girls join them
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  • From doubledamn on July 14, 2014
    Nice chapter, though re-reading this to remind myself what it was about has me really, REALLY hoping that Snape or Minerva (can't spell her last name) gets Harry to go to St. Mungos at the end of the school year. 10 years later might not do much but better late than never right?
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  • From ANON - Sian on July 07, 2014
    Might i suggest to upload the story then to hpfanficarchive.com? while FF might be arbitarily strict on adult histories, Adult-FF is IMHO to heavily loaded with Slash to wade through if you want to get to good stories
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  • From ANON - lordamnesia on July 03, 2014
    Very nicely done! This story is building up very well, I really like how you are taking it kinda slow, letting the characters develop. Keep up the good work!
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  • From doubledamn on May 14, 2014
    This is just brilliant and I really, REALLY hate the fact that this site doesn't have 'New Chapter' notifications. Great so far, I've only seen a Chaser Harry (Ravenclaw) once before, and you nearly never see a Harry Hufflepuff. Great work, I can't wait for more. I do find it interesting that you haven't had to change Ron's personality at all from canon.
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on April 23, 2014
    Why is this story on adultfanfiction. You haven't written anything at this point that would get it fogged on fanfiction.net. Interesting premise but if you plan on writing as you have and not getting vulgar consider moving you story so more people can read.
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  • From ANON - SirZic on April 12, 2014
    Great chapters!
    Continuuuuuuuue,
    Z.
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  • From ANON - potrot on February 03, 2014
    It could have more sex in and be more perverted apart from that it is a great read
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  • From ANON - paul120 on January 10, 2014
    The very best Harry/Hermione ever righten
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  • From ANON - J on September 10, 2013
    Its a bit annoying that you first attack others choices and use it as a motivation; when you fall into several classic traps yourself.

    Not to mention this is all your standard issue "Ron the Death Eater / Dumbledore the conspiring liar" composition.

    Add to that that you shift between past tense and current and you got a very, very annoying read.
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  • From ANON - TharzZzDunN on July 31, 2013
    The premise seems to move along for a first chapter, but why would it take weeks to get to London?
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  • From ANON - Ibris on July 29, 2013
    Hey, I just came across this story and I like how you've written it so far. I see you've been bitched to about the characterization you've given Harry and Hermione but I don't think it's too far-fetched and, even if it was, it IS fanfiction as you said. Now, while you said it won't be a smutfic, I hope you won't cast it aside too much, since erotic literature is one of my guilty pleasures and the main reason I wander around this website every once in a while. Nevertheless, the story is going on greatly so far =)

    Other than that, I just can say I hope you'll update whenever you can. Have a good day
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  • From ANON - Amanda B on July 21, 2013
    great story . i look forward to read more soon. please update

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  • From ANON - Dylan on June 07, 2013
    almost lost hope in an update but i get that u have RL stuff to deal with. interesting take on the troll scene but y was she in the bath room so long in the first place. i wonder though y u picked chaser, personal i think like wood he would have made a fair beater. all in all good chapter plz keep it up.
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  • From ANON - JM on June 05, 2013
    Gotta say good story. Its refreshing to get a story that actually has a plot to it and not just smut. Have you considered getting a beta to look over your stories before you submit them. Its a great story just has a few grammer issues. Anyway Update soon. Im loving this story.
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