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Reviews for "Why Me?"

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From demonsangel on July 22, 2013
    Oh my gods, why have I not read this sooner?! This is hilarious and I love it XD I can honestly say, your's is the first version of Tom to actually scare me! Very very good job and I can't wait to read more! I read all 8 chapters today, time well spent!
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  • From angeljin on July 22, 2013
    Love it; but I think even Aragog would get a stomachache from eating Umbitch, sorry, Umbridge.
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  • From BlueOrchid on July 21, 2013
    Diggory is a "self-professed vegetarian vampire of some kind"??! AHAHAHAHA that is SO hilarious!
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  • From ANON - Usagi on July 06, 2013
    Good story, nice idea. Though you do have a number of grammatical and punctuation errors. You use exclamation points (!) a lot in dialogue, which tends to give the feeling that your characters are yelling at each other a lot. Some of your wording is a bit off too. Like 'Lucius, it didn't appear, was afraid of spiders, they just unnerved him.' This sentence is clunky and confusing and I had to read over it a couple times to understand it. It would be better worded 'Lucius didn't appear to be afraid of spiders, they just unnerved him.'
    You have a few sentences like this, but other than that, good job. :)
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  • From ANON - yngoldfogee on July 04, 2013
    Hilarious! I laughed so hard I had tears, not to mention that I had to replay parts of "Americal Unearthed" or re-read parts of the chapter as I kept missing parts of one or the other. {I don't usually have that much of a problem listening to shows and reading at the same time} Looking forward to future chapters.
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  • From abbicat on July 03, 2013
    LOLOLOL I LOVE this story :)
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  • From LeVeen on July 03, 2013
    Speedy! you're brilliant!! I laughed so hard that hubby came to check on me. This entire story is hilarious!! I love it!!
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  • From ANON - Rainbow12004 on July 02, 2013
    I love this chapter
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  • From ANON - whitebuffalowmn on July 02, 2013
    This was hilarious! I about peed myselfover Lucius being chased by Padfoot!!


    KUDOS!
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  • From RogueMudblood on June 27, 2013

    Chapter three

    Ah, yes - appealing to monetary punitive measures would bring Lucius around.

    And I nearly died at
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  • From RogueMudblood on June 27, 2013

    Chapter two

    Whatever version of Voldemort-! *cackles* Oh, Harry, you have no idea. This is just perfect - truly! Flaming Voldemort and possessive Nagini. Too funny!

    sputters Erm... Tom and Remus. Interesting. I have such a clear vision of this character you've depicted that the next time I read any story where Voldemort is OOC, I'm going to start reading it with this 'voice' - MST ala Speedy. :)

    I'm giddy! Oh this is great! What would you even call plant sex? Florality? *shrugs* Regardless, Sirius' line about Padfoot is perfect!

    I'm loving this tale! And I admit curiosity as to Albus' reaction, though I can't wait to see Lucius hex someone (Umbridge! Umbridge! Umbridge!).

    Well, if there's no hope for you, there's none for me either as I am enjoying this thoroughly! And you're extremely fun. :P
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  • From RogueMudblood on June 27, 2013

    Chapter one

    Ack! It's a good thing it was a plain milkshake I was drinking, else I'd probably be choking right now. Hilarious!

    I'm seriously having a giggling fit here - the way you describe their reactions is absolutely perfect! Now why do I have a clear image of you cackling with glee behind your keyboard while you typed this?

    Upon Sirius' entrance to the story, I realize that I really need to put all drinks down while reading this. And no eating either. Especially no eating.

    This is great - honestly and truly. It's comic mayhem at its finest. I'm thoroughly enjoying this!

    clicks link for chapter two...
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  • From ANON - Chibiayane on June 27, 2013
    THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!
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  • From ANON - chibiayane on June 21, 2013
    I could not keep a straight face during Voldemort's parts AT ALL! XD
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  • From ANON - Rainbow12004 on June 16, 2013
    lol I love it. This is what I need due to me been sick. This may my night.
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