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Reviews for Unwanted Bonds

By : CelticKitsune
  • From SomethingElse on January 07, 2015
    Interesting story. Like the twists you've added and hope you can continue.
    Do work with your beta and maybe even find a second to catch what the first missed.
    Though I don't use one, I often wonder how much I've missed in my stories.
    One note for you: In chapter fifteen, you refer to Draco as the blondee, not the blond.
    This is probably just a typo, and a simple fix.
    Many people ignore the male and female forms of blonde and brunette, but I find them distracting if used improperly.
    Keep working, don't worry about slow chapter updates. Those who like your work will wait.
    You're faster with them than I am.

    I'll be reading, Bob
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  • From NAnderson on November 18, 2014
    I'm so happy I found this story again :) I really love how its all progressing. And I'm making sure I bookmark it this time ;) Cant wait for more.
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  • From magentah on November 12, 2014
    I love how patient Narcissa is with Harry! Just what he needs. This was a lovely update! I found myself grinning with each passing look and blush between the boys and am really looking forward to seeing what their relationship grows into. Thanks for sticking with this story--it's one of my favorites! :)
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  • From ANON - Shadow on October 25, 2014
    I love Cissa. She is one of my favorite characters from canon. I loved her mainly because of her strength. Yes she had the evil git in her home but she showed that as a mother she was unafraid of doing anything to protect her son. Even if it meant lying to Voldemort and saving Harry. So go Cissa :)
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  • From ANON - staar on October 24, 2014
    Really good here !!!!!!! new reader and can't wait for the next update !!!!!!
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  • From NAnderson on July 10, 2014
    That was a freaking wonderful update! I can't wait to see what happens next in the story :)
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  • From ANON - Naughty_megs on July 09, 2014
    Really loving this story! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - HEARTSTAR on July 05, 2014
    yay thank you foe the update and now harry has to tell what happens a at the durs I look forward to the following chapter ty again.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on July 04, 2014
    Please update the story.
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  • From NAnderson on March 14, 2014
    That was an awesome chapter :)
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  • From Alysha_insyirah on March 01, 2014
    Update pleaseeee ^_^
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  • From PeriLover on February 09, 2014
    Ok, you write too good a story. I stayed up waaaayyyyyy to late to finish reading all 12 chapters. I like where you are taking this. It will be interesting to see how the guys manage to work within the bond. I can't wait to see what you do to Ron. What a prick! I think he needs a little "twin time" lol!! I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks for the hard work!
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  • From ANON - eaglexeyes on December 15, 2013
    Wonderful story -----

    It will be interesting to see how dear old dad reacts when he hears of the bond -----

    It will also prove to be a very interesting scene if/when Padfoot/Sirius actually steps up and hugs Harry with Draco there ......


    keep writing as life allows
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  • From ANON - Kelsin on December 01, 2013
    I just found this story, and I instantly fell in love with it! I can't wait to see where you go with it. Update soon please! :)
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on November 29, 2013
    yay for more, and it sounds like draco and harry are on their way to coming to some kind of understanding. and i can't wait to see siri and remus' take on the situation as well. keep up the good work :)
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