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By : thewandcrafter
  • From Smile317 on February 14, 2022

    Just found this story. Loved it. I'm sorry it is unfinished 😔


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  • From ANON - on July 03, 2016

    So I just found this. Read all 13 chapters in the space on an hour. And it stop there!! Are you mad! The writing was beautiful, you've pulled me into a world with a very believable severus and harry. And I need more. Please update this soon. It'd be a shame to leave such a wonderful story as unfinished when I can feel that your so close to the end. Keep up the awesome work. 


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  • From Antuhsa on April 28, 2016
    I love this story! I was especially amazed by your ideas concerning Harry's job. Very imaginative. I do wish you had shown us some of the dislike between Harry and Severus though. In your story they seem to have forgotten about it, which is a little unbelievable. I also feel the near rape scene didn't quite fit, as others have pointed out as well. Either way, I enjoyed the story very much and hope you are going to finish it one day.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2015
    I really enjoyed this -it wld b great to see it finishd, to see how harry gets his man.
    I really enjoyed Harry's train of thought and the humour u have included. Thanks for writing.
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  • From LyraRFIM on September 05, 2014
    Drat. I need more... I was reading and then it suddenly stopped at chapter 13... I got sucked into the story so deeply that I didn't even notice that I was near the end of the available chapters. May I have more, please? And thank you for such a great story!
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  • From ANON - Alonna on June 06, 2014
    Pleeeeeeease update soon, I'm dying to read more! I think I've only read this story like 5x. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - AR on April 03, 2014
    This is an incredible harry/severus story! I love the slow buildup, and I can't wait for the next chapter after the wedding! Please update soon!!
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  • From VSBree on January 20, 2014
    I love the development of your characters and their relationship. I'm an impatient little girlie, but I enjoyed your well-written story. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - pooh on December 26, 2013
    MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, good chapter..
    on to the next one
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  • From ANON - pooh on December 26, 2013
    Had to stop the reading...I do hope you are going to finish this story, its really good...
    on to the next chapters...
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  • From ANON - JustSomeStranger on December 25, 2013
    I have to say, I have never had a story that jerked my emotions around as much as this story. I can't help but to become lost in the pure emotionalism just seeping from this story. Please keep up the good work. This is by far one of the best snarrys I've ever read.
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  • From dantae on December 25, 2013
    Chapter 13 actually got my crying. My stomach is all in knots and I don't know what to do!!! I need to know what happens next. You've dragged us along on this rollercoaster of emotions and I just can't wait to see the end, at the same time I never want it to be over! Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - cariad123 on December 22, 2013
    Thirtenn fantastic chapters loved the writing style ...Adore Harry and Severus's relationship so want more Brilliant stiry
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  • From Becky on December 22, 2013
    I have to say I
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  • From ANON - Lmnop on December 22, 2013
    This is an exceptionally good fic. I can't wait for more! I hope that Harry's neuroses lessen as they connect further. Love!
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