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Reviews for Harry Potter: Monster Girl Quest

By : Almister
  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2014
    Quick chapter, but they can't all be big. I'm looking forward to a Centaur. Centauress?
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  • From ravenwing on July 11, 2014
    Keep up the hard work.mthis a fun read.
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  • From ANON - jupi on July 10, 2014
    This story is really entertaining. I'm looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - BBWulf on July 10, 2014
    That was a hot chapter. In more ways than one. I've always wondered when a good, in my opinion, fiction would incorporate the 'game' setting AND include a wide array of 'kinks.' Anywho, great chapter, as usual. Loving the way the 'game(?)' operates. I am also enjoying how this actually has a story to it, instead of being a collection of urelated smut scenes.
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  • From ANON - blackdragon71425 on July 10, 2014
    Hey, just wanted to say I'm loving this story. To address your "rant" last chapter; while the encounter with the ogre may not have been my cup of tea, I did as you suggested everyone does and just skipped to the XP, perks, and achievements part. So I agree with you, if they don't like it, don't read it, no need to attack your skills as a writer. Anyway, you have encouragement from me. If you can go through to 7th year I'd be massively impressed and entertained. I look for a new chapter from you a few times a day. My only request; Is there any way you could put something akin to a character sheet at the end of your chapters? So for us reading at home can keep track of all the skills Harry has allotted where and what perks he has chosen? Just a thought, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Victoria on July 10, 2014
    I love this sensuous. playful story! It's great how you've combined gaming and magic and sex into one fabulous story. I haven't read any of the reviews yet but I can't figure out why anyone would commplain. This is Adult fanfiction and anything goes here. If they don't like it, they can read something else. As for me, I'm impressed with how much thought and realistic detail you've put into the sexual characteristics of each magical being and especially all of the levels and abilities Harry is acquiring in his Game of life. Looking forward to even more.
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  • From MickGesitt on July 10, 2014
    At the risk of making a lame pun, that was hot. The massage and oil bath made that highly anticipated scene with Nora even more incredible. Once again you fully embraced the unique characteristics of the specific monster girl to make the scene uniquely erotic. I even liked the bit where Nora noted that Harry "only had one" since lizards tend to have two.

    I hope you plan to keep Nora as a regular character in the story, I've been reading Harry Potter fanfiction for around ten years and I've never seen a fic where Norberta was kept around as a Dragon Girl. I know that this story is about Harry having relations with a bunch of different and unique monster girls but if you take the time to explore the relationship between Harry and Nora - maybe do something similar to what you have with him and Tsukiko - you could have something truly unique and original here.

    Looking forward to what you come up with next.
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  • From ANON - LL on July 08, 2014
    Glad to see you haven't given up! Fuck those whiners bitching about anal stimulation, I love what you're doing and one thing I mildly dislike isn't enough to make me drop something this great. I am kind of sad to hear that herms won't be showing up very often- they have more options than most, so they're extra entertaining.
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  • From MickGesitt on July 08, 2014
    I'm glad to see that you're not discouraged by the negative opinion of others. In the end, when you're writing a story like this the most important person to please is yourself and if other people enjoy your work as well, then that's even better. I, for one, think this story is great. You've provided an incredible and very creative collection of magical creatures. Each creature is different and as a result each sex scene is unique which allows you to experiment with a wide variety of kinks that only a full furnish fantasy world like Harry Potter can provide.

    Your 'pixie' scene from this latest chapter where you fully exploited her small size was beyond brilliant. And I don't know why people were complaining about the vampire scene. I thought it was really great, it showed that in the grand scheme of things that while Harry is getting a lot stronger because of his in-game abilities and raised stats, there are still some creatures out there that he can't handle yet. I've seen enough Futanari Doujin that I have no problem with the ogre scene, its like you said, it's not like Harry's going out and getting buggered, it was a unique opportunity to exploit a monster girl with both sets of equipment.

    I'm really looking forward to where this story goes. I'm excited for the Nor(bert)a scene that you teased with this latest chapter and I'm looking forward to you working your magic with Harry and Catgirl-Hermione after the Polyjuice Potion backfires. And after seeing what you did with Norberta and turning her into a dragon girl, I can only assume (hope) that the Baslisk will get similar treatment and become some kind of gorgon-snake-girl so you can have an awesome monster sex scene down in the Chamber of Secrets at the climax of the second year story. For that matter, do you plan to go into Third Year with this? Because good old Remus Lupin will provide a smorgasbord of unique creatures for you and Harry to experiment with.

    Keep up the great work! Ignore flames, revel in the offense that you've caused but also enjoy the heartfelt praise that readers like me are giving you for the incredible and creative story.
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  • From ANON - Brian on July 08, 2014
    Good chapter. I'm glad you continued on. And again if you would like any help I want to keep this fic going any way I can. :) -LTWad
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  • From domic on July 08, 2014
    with the embrace the night perk i realy ho harry makes him self a shade
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  • From Kolar on July 08, 2014
    You tell those throat jumpers, fuck em all man, write what you feel like writing and ignore anyone that's dumb enough to actually flame you.
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  • From ANON - BBWulf on July 08, 2014
    Great chapter. Really liking the variety so far. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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  • From harpy81 on July 07, 2014
    Thankyou for finally updating again
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  • From ANON - NSU90BW on July 03, 2014
    Hi, I caught this fic when you first posted and I've enjoyed it so far. I hope you continue working on it. I have seen a few fics with the game style so I realize how hard they can be to finish. So if you need any help with ideas or beta'ing I would love to keep this fic going. Just email me if you would I'd love to hear how your going to take the story.
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