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Reviews for Coming Home

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From M-Lee on October 06, 2015
    This is just amazing. I had work but I stayed up just to read all that you had up so far. I am addicted to this one. I like that it is super light but has sirius undertones. I cant wait to see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on August 18, 2015
    Thank you so much for your incredible new chapter! I loved hearing more of the backstory about Remus, Sirius nnd Harry's relationship. Thank goodness Harry didn't let them get away from bonding with him. Hopefully this will keep them all safer and happier. Excellent update! Can't wait to hear how Remus responds to Dumbledore's letter!
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  • From ANON - starr on August 17, 2015
    Rita she is still alive !!!!! pain in the butt she is .....can't wait for the next meeting with the redheads and or Hermione the noisy one !!!!! Thanks for the update !!:):)
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  • From ANON - Chester on July 27, 2015
    Really enjoy this story and look forward to reading more. I must ask/plead that Marissa or Harry's girlfriends don't get hurt/killed by Deatheaters!! It would just break my heart.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2015
    They are kind of crazy for coming to the UK...were they the only ones who could do this? With the triad bond will they just mention he was of age and leave it there? I love his gaggle of girls. LOL.
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  • From BAFan on June 22, 2015
    Ch. 8

    Let me get this out of the way, then I'll start my review:

    " . . . And, of course, the rest had to do with seeing if Sirius, Remus and Harry were amicable to once more helping with what was going on. . . ."

    The word you want is "amenable." "Amicable" refers to a situation that is peaceable, without disagreement or rancor (an amicable divorce), whereas "amenable" specifically means agreeing to something, as in your sentence above. So, for example, the meeting was amicable because both parties were amenable to fulfilling the terms. I also see a lot of "amiable/amenable" confusion, but I won't go into that now. Anyway, hope this clarifies the usages for you.

    I think this started out as a great storyline, one which was different from any of your others that I can recall. I've decided that I'm not going to write more than that until I've gone back and re-read the whole story to date, because there's a strong possibility that I'd be confusing it with others of yours.


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  • From ANON - autumngold on June 21, 2015
    Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! I do have to wonder, however, why the Weasleys think they are owed information about what Harry has beeen doing with his life? He doesn't owe them anything, they did nothing to save him from Dumbledore or the Dursleys. If it hadn't been for Remus and Sirius, Harry would still be stuck in the miserable plans Dumbledore has for him. I doubt he is safe now from them, even with his bondmates. Thank goodness Harry has people around him now that really care about him! Excellent new chapter! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - starr on June 21, 2015
    They were really smart to have Harry on the phone so he couldn't answer all their nosey questions, but it's coming !!!! loved it ...so the girlfriends are lesbians, good for Harry that he can have so many friends with no issues !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!
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  • From cullengal101 on May 01, 2015
    hi
    great chapter
    please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - starr on April 29, 2015
    loved it, like the saying goes I would love to be a fly on the wall, to see what is going to happen when they all meet again !!! Thanks for the update !!):):)
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  • From ANON - autumngold on April 29, 2015
    Excellent new chapter! I can't wait for Remus, Sirius and Harry to tell Dumbledore and the others to fight their own war. Also, why would they hand out their expensive phones to Dumbledore and the others before they are available to the public? Did Dumbledore help Harry get away from his abusive relatives? Because of the help Harry wasn't given, I hope that Dumbledore has to wait like everyone else for the phones. If anyone deserves them first it would be the aurors. Thank you for your Outstanding new chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - mack on April 13, 2015
    Please upload soon
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  • From ANON - starr on March 31, 2015
    all three of them smoking had me laughing all over the place !!!!! Thanks for the update....and lets see the reaction of all of them when they met !!!!!! see you soon ):):):):):))):)
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  • From ANON - autumngold on March 26, 2015
    I am so glad that Harry, Remus and Sirius have plans to deal with the Order. I can just imagine how Dumbledore is so sure that they are back to fight Voldemort. Hopefully, they won't give in to his demands. Even better would be if they let it slip that Dumbledore left him with abusive people. There is no reason that Harry had to be mental abused at the Dursleys. Dumbledore could have taken care of that easily if he had wanted to. Hopefully Remus and Sirius will make him pay for his mistakes. Fabulous update! Thank you so much for your incredible new chapter! Can't wait to see what you have planned for Harry, Remus and Sirius next!
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  • From ANON - psychosmurf on March 04, 2015
    Ch 1/Prologue: Great start.
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