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Reviews for The Guile and Devotion of a Black Heir

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From Lady_Arachne on March 11, 2015
    Loved the chapter!
    I thought that there was going to be a big scene with Rhadamanthus that would have turned Rabastan against Harry, but I liked how it happened in the chapter!

    Loved the Rowle scene and Flint's scene, I wonder if Flint will try to put the moves on Harry during their tutoring. :D

    Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

    Big question, you said in the chapter that Harry had greeted and made small talk with some of the members of the Wizengamot, does that mean Lucius and Xerxes aren't the only Death Eaters on the Wizengamot?
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  • From chris7100 on March 10, 2015
    You made Marcus so attractive in this chapter that it's hard to continue to support the Rabastan/Harry pairing. It almost seems like it's less love and more a weird manifestation of Harry's "saving people" thing. I'm also rather appalled that Lucius isn't more supportive of removing Radamanthus from the picture.
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  • From djaddict on March 10, 2015
    I just wish you would let Harry kill Rhadamanthus! Lol Really,really painfully.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 10, 2015
    Wonderful update!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on March 10, 2015
    I hope that you know how much I love your incredible story! I did get scared, however, that Harry plan wouldn't work. Thank you for not leaving me wondering until Narcissa and Lucius' New Years party on whether Harry and Rabastan will stay together. I do wonder, however, if Harry and Rabastan will still get engaged? Absolutely wonderful update! Can't wait to find out what you have planned for Harry next!
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  • From ANON - starr on March 10, 2015
    Harry was so good in getting Ras all ton oh there.... and hope to see in the need future about getting Pancy hurt of something for being all over Ras....Thanks !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 21, 2015
    I get that the Order only knows what they are being told, but how can they believe that Harry had any choice? I'm looking forward ţo Bill seeing eventually that Harry is no puppet. That's what I'm hoping for at least. What also bales me is why the horcrux keep them from at least going to battle. If they could disemboy and weaten him it would buy time and delay alliances and power building.

    I'm curious as to whether Harry should be resorted....but he loves his team and being in Griffindor has to be some protection from slurs.

    I'm hoping this evolves towads Harry gaining influence and power to make changes without Voldie's indiscriminate viokence. Not that I want to see him a dark lord but he can be ruthless and smart without being evil.

    I find myself lI king Rabastan and hope he doesn't turn back to a torturing, selfishe git. It would also be interesting to see if Severus is more loyal to Dd or Voldie.....or if he would be open to a third option. He would be a great resource for getting rid of a pesky future father in law without suspicion. I'd bet Xerxes or Rodolfo would do anything to protect Rabastan but Harry won't know and can't trust in that at this point.
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  • From ANON - mamid3 on February 14, 2015
    I immediately got hook on your story, its good and original y just hope that you don't leave it unfinished like so many stories out there. Plz update soon ;-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2015
    Nice twist there at the end because I'm pretty sure the new arrival is Charlie - it would make sense. Maybe he could even become a love interest for Rodolphus in time - after Bella is dealt with, of course.
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  • From Lady_Arachne on February 05, 2015
    Loved the chapter!
    I love how Harry and Rabastan were trying to get around the traditions of the betrothal period, and I love that Harry did all his homework in about two days to the point of exhaustion all so he could spend more time with Rabastan! After all that and what Harry said at dinner, I don't know what Rhadamanthus could have possibly said to turn Rabastan against Harry!

    Looking forward to finding out in the next chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on February 04, 2015
    Yes, a lovely, loonng, chapter.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on February 04, 2015
    Your new chapter is incredible! I feel so sorry for Harry, being caught between two selfish and evil madmen. While I understand that Dumbledore just sees Harry as a horcrux who needs to die for the greater good, how does that make his actions towards him right? I love the fact that Harry doesn't want to fight, he is so kind and loving to his betrothed. I just wish there was some way that Rabastian would choose him over Voldemort. As for Bill, his thoughts are horrible. I really hope that he gets in deep trouble for telling Dumbledore what is going on in the Wizengamot. Fabulous update! Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - staar on February 04, 2015
    Well Harry sure has his work out for him....trying to kill his Reb's father and all the Redheads that are now the enemy !!! Thank for the update loved it !!!!!!!!!!!! Be good !!!
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  • From ANON - Kari Jordan on January 30, 2015
    I love your work and this story is amazing I can not wait till the next chapter comes out
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  • From ANON - tkykitty on January 28, 2015
    I'm loving this new fic of yours! I was reading Drackens and saw your after post about your new story. I was super excited to see what it entailed. At first I was completely thrown by the pairing Rab/Harry but I like it! More than like it I love it! And that's because you create such a round full world where these characters live. I think the only character I hate is Rabastan's fathere lol. But you make it so easy to hate him.
    I've read all six chapters and am thirsty for more. I would review each chapter but there is sooooo much that I don't even think I could process it all in a review lol. Needless to say I'm excited to see: 1)How bill Weseley will handle his lordship and if he actually expands his mind instead of following Albus, 2)how harry plans to handle Rabastan's father 3) their winter break together 4) if any of harry's old friends actually grow brains 5) how voldie plays in your new universe and 6)every other new surprise you have coming for your readers.
    Thanks for being a great writer and I look forward to more of this universe you've created.

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