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Reviews for Temptation *COMPLETE*

By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From JaxPendragon on February 27, 2015
    I am liking this story. Just one point...it's "Victoire", not "Victorie". I always thought Astoria was the "good" Greengrass...LOL.

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  • From ANON - pickles on February 26, 2015
    OH CRAP!!!! Didn't see any of that coming.. I have a feeling Rose is going to be in for a rude awakening. Especially when she hears the phrases Scorpius mother was calling hers. I have a feeling that the boyfriend would like to hang at the Granger house. Just WOW.... Glad all is cleared up with Teddy but the Malfoys are looking for trouble. Wonder if Draco has said Hermione's name while sleeping one to many times for the Mrs. to be pissed. Waiting for more. PS this is my night of surprises. Bought V C Andrews book Christopher's Diary: Echoes of Dollanganger... Didn't realize it was book 2. It is good as a stand alone but the ending is a supper surprise. Book 3 coming out in May and I think I'm hooked..an
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  • From ANON - starr on February 26, 2015
    well ine ? does Rose feel bad that her mom is a muggle ??????????hope not and if not she needs to know what thatching said to Hermione ....God Bill's daughter is an ass ok poor Teddie paying for it ....so good ....and about Rose and Scop don't know but she needs to see and know all that happened and if it's true then she can go and shit with all the Malfoys !!!!!!!!!!!!!!and where is Ron in these can't he do or say anything or is he just an dumb ass as always !!!!!!!!!!! Thanks !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Josy on February 26, 2015
    I just want more!! Everytime i see that you've uploaded a new chapter My heart skips a beat. I love This story so much!
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  • From ANON - pickles on February 25, 2015
    YIKES!!!!! Oh please tell me you are going to upload the next installment immediately..... Can't believe how you left it again.... I think you love torturing the faithful readers... it is an amazing chapter but for all of us that are really really enjoying this story please upload ASAP
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 25, 2015
    Though harshly written, I was on her side with the letter to Rose. The way she wrote her letter screamed "Malfoy" and I would hate to think of Rose becoming someone who thinks themselves better than others, or "above" her own parents. She needs a reality check and Astoria still needs to be smacked! Now, the letter to Teddy... sigh... she didn't read all of his and hasn't seen him in months. But, he also apparently hasn't come around to see her, so I do wonder what's up with him, too. I do know though, that Hermione is really not ready for a relationship when she could toss one away so easily without even questioning him. She's supposed to be the adult. I know her insecurities are leading the way on this, but she hasn't really tried to fight them. I don't know... sigh... Thanks for the update though! :-) HG4eva
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  • From ANON - starr on February 25, 2015
    Well if it's true Teddy is just like his father an asshole !!!!!!!!!!! Hermione should just hex him !!!!Thanks for the update
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  • From Severus1snape on February 25, 2015
    So sad!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 25, 2015
    Well, good gracious! I surely didn't see that coming. Now, I feel so badly for her and I hope he has a VERY GOOD explanation for all he did to pursue her, just to break her heart. I know he's young and all, but I can't grasp that he would be that cruel on purpose. No idea what's going on, but I trust you to fix it. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Jaxpendragon on February 25, 2015
    Mrs. Lupin............That is so NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just when it gets to the good part of the chapter....a cliffie.....You ARE EVIL!!!!!!!! Seriously though, I am loving this story and I hope that Victwat is just telling a fib. I don't think there are any of your stories I haven't liked and greatly enjoy reading.

    Jax
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  • From ANON - Locke Lamora on February 24, 2015
    Hey, Locke here, love your story and I'm very sorry I've not been able to review until now. I must congratulate you on writing a story that has actually held my interest past chapter 2. Most seem to lose steam or become repetitive after that but each chapter is something new. As to the current chapter, I get the sneaky feeling that Victoria it's up to something and that Teddy's going to get the bad end of the wand for it. I'm thrilled that I've found someone who can actually write a decent story without it being 90% porn. Anyways,
    Wishing you well,
    Locke Lamora
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  • From ANON - starr on February 23, 2015
    well like always men can and women can't, witch sucks !!!!!!!!! Thanks for the updates !!!!!!!!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 23, 2015
    I am glad your mother is out of the hospital and I hope things are going very well for all of you. Thank you for the update and getting Ron out of the way quickly and relatively painlessly. lol I am glad she so easily defended them, even though she's still concerned. I look forward to more soon! HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 19, 2015
    Thank you!! All my worries about her faded away in the first few paragraphs. :-) I am glad she's truly in this to be with him. They may have a hard road ahead, but now I can get fully behind them, since she is. I am also now REALLY jealous of her, because she has all of that. lol Your writing is never horrible! lol Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 19, 2015
    Yay! More to read after this. :-) Thank you for such a sweet date, so far. I am glad no one caused them any great issues and that Teddy got what he wanted in seeing her in public. I hope Hermione is starting to figure out what she wants and can commit to Teddy, so she doesn't break his poor heart. Before that, I hope they have a great rest of their night. :-) Thanks! Onto 13... HG4eva
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