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Reviews for Temptation *COMPLETE*

By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From Lady_Stardust on February 19, 2015
    I just got through reading chapter 7 and am very confused.
    When exactly was Lupin single when Hermione was around?
    He was with Tonks the entire time.
    Hermione was off hunting horcruxes and hallows with Harry for a year.
    The very day that they returned was the day Tonks and Remus died.
    So, yeah, unless they never went on their quests, then there is a big hole in your story.

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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 18, 2015
    Hi there! First, never apologize for what you write or how you write it. :-) Your readers will interpret as we see fit anyway. lol You are a fantastic storyteller and I get so into your stories that I find myself (as you have seen) being happy, sad, proud, and angry at them. That's a compliment to your writing!

    Now, the review... my heart still aches for Teddy and his feelings of inferiority for Remus, but I am glad she gave him the memories for three reasons. First, it made me better understand and forgive her. I feel so much better knowing she wasn't just blase' about the whole deal and I am really sorry she was hurt and used by someone she trusted. Second, Teddy needed to better understand (as did I) the situation, so he could see that it wasn't love or even lust, but instead a cruel man who used and abused a young woman's trust and need for stress relief. Finally, I am glad she gave him the memories as she did so that he could see a full picture of his father and not just know him as a saint or sinner. I think you did a marvelous job on it! I am glad Draco wanted to give Scorpius the world, but I did want to pluck Astoria in the nose through the first scene. I enjoyed the glimpse into the negotiations, though I still think being engaged at 13 and planning to marry at 17 is a bit ridiculous, especially for people who live to be in their 100s. What's the rush, sheesh?! lol That's enough rambling for me. :-) Thank you, as always! HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 16, 2015
    I feel badly for him. I know he asked, which would be normal, but to know your father cheated through his marriage with the woman you love has got to be heartburn-inducing. And, now I am more than a little angry with her. I wish she would at least have actual regret, but since she kept sleeping with Remus after he was married... sigh. I don't know how Teddy will be able to get past it completely. I also am not sure what she's thinking now. She isn't turning him away, but she isn't opening up to him either. I get that she wants the young, sexy version of Remus, but is that fair to Teddy? I just want to hug him. You still have me though, because I love your writing and am intrigued by where you're going with this. :-) Thanks, hon! HG4eva
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  • From MoonlightVision on February 16, 2015
    Great story so far! Love the personality you've given Teddy!
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  • From ANON - staar on February 16, 2015
    that was so sweet and to have been with Lupin 3x and Teey understood, well good for him cause I would not have....hope all goes as Rose wants it to with Malfoy !!!! Thanks
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  • From ANON - staar on February 16, 2015
    poor Hermione Rose is going to drive her nuts now !!!!!!! so funny loved it
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 15, 2015
    Well you achieved both of your goals beautifully! I am glad she had that dream, so I know she feels guilt over sleeping with Remus. I don't care about the age difference, but he was a cheater and she, his mistress, for all intents and purposes. Sigh... I hope poor Tonks never found out. I love that Teddy knows what he wants and has spent time trying to let her go, but I don't think Hermione is "there" yet. Sigh again... lol I am really enjoying this and thank you again! HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 15, 2015
    I am glad Hermione is coming into her own and taking her life back. She needs to know and love herself before someone else can. BUT, she should at least express some forgiveness. If she thinks about it from his point of view, and with the impetuousness of youth, she should realize what a horrid shock that had to be for him to hear. I look forward to her deciding what to do with the betrothal, too. Interesting little twist there. :-) I don't think I've ever seen it before, so good for you! Thank you and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - staar on February 14, 2015
    way to go Teddy !!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 10, 2015
    I agree that Draco got to him, but I also hope he doesn't give up. I know Draco has his own issues with her, but he needs to let Teddy lead his own life and make his own successes and mistakes. I don't know if you plan for them to have a forever future (I am liking the idea though), but she needs his love and adoration, and he needs her love and support. I would never have put these two together, but you are doing it well and making me a believer. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 10, 2015
    I hope your foot is not paining you too much and thank you for the update. Sorry to keep this short, but I am off to the next one. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Josefine on February 10, 2015
    OMG i love IT!!
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  • From ANON - staar on February 09, 2015
    No tell Draco just to shut up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it :)):):::)):):):):):)
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  • From ANON - Ice Empress on February 09, 2015
    Everyday is a temptation waiting on the fabulous updates! I love the view point and circumstances surrounding this story. Hermione is lonely but willing with a hint of reluctance that makes Teddy even more wicked. The cute way you show his arousal is lovely. Keep up the wonderful work I await your updates which I devour like chocolate.
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  • From ANON - staar on February 09, 2015
    So Ginny and Molly are ok with it !!! wow that's a first .....and they both agree that Ron was and is an ass !!! ok that's good ..Terry reading all of that was awesome !!!!! More
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