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Reviews for Temptation *COMPLETE*

By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 04, 2015
    Just found this little gem and am enjoying it. As an older woman, I like the idea that a younger man can find her sexy as hell. :-) I hope Teddy puts every thought of inferiority out of her head and helps her become the confident woman she should have been! I also look forward to seeing Ron lose the children. I just hope Hugo can come to terms with it. Thank you and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Qtness on February 04, 2015
    Loving it so far!

    Just an FYI, Teddy IS actually a nickname for Edward. Just ask James Franco-- his middle name is Edward and he was called Teddy his whole childhood until the middle of high school. Doesn't necessarily translate/make sense to me. And I've never heard of it for anyone else. Just sayin'. Must not be that common.... Not like the more well known "Bill" short for "William" (which doesn't exactly flow organically either-- you'd think it would be short for Billiam ;).

    Anyway, I can totally see Hermione not feeling sexy, especially after having kids. Been there, done that. And to have someone call you dumpy even if you aren't really fucks with your head! Can't wait for it to come to light with Ginny (and then Molly) hearing what Ron said! They'll tear him a new one!

    And yes, of course, looking forward to the yummy hotness of Teddy/Hermione! :) Can't wait for more!


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  • From ANON - joeparas on February 04, 2015
    Very much liked H/G byplay, even though I still think Ginny would have punched Ron in the face the second she found out what he said to Hermione. His mother would probably do worse... -_-

    The name itself wasn't the big deal, but rather Malfoy being informal with a -essentially- child. Screamed 'wrong'.

    The focus of the story seems to be moving slighly away from Hermione/Teddy, you should make it the absolute focus (I imagine that's why people are reading this) and make everything else periphery, even background and offscreen).
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  • From ANON - staar on February 04, 2015
    and she believed Ron and she is a smart witch what happened brain out the window that she would listen to anything Ron said !!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - joeparas on February 03, 2015
    I'm sorry, what?

    Ginny would have gone postal when finding out what Ron said to his wife before leaving her. There's also no way Harry wouldn't know either. You went too far in that regard for me to be able to suspend disbelief, and it totally pulled me out.

    Either Ron was ridiculously, ott dickhead or the reactions from a fiery couple like Harry and Ginny were far too tame.

    Ginny has been a legitimate bitch for a remarkable amount less when it isn't justified...

    Draco referring to any kid by their nickname just read as weird too. I'd have gone for Theodore or even mister Lupin like he'd have been brought up to.
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  • From ANON - tinkerbabe7 on February 03, 2015
    I'm liking this story so far :). Can't say I've read much or any Hermione/Teddy pairings before. Well Can't wait to read more :D
    I hope something happens to Ron and Hermione gets custody of her kids back :D
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  • From ANON - joeparas on February 03, 2015
    Sigh

    Try to keep things on the believable side of drama. Hermione asking him to leave and Teddy being distraught because he accidentally saw her while fixing her roof? If you're going to introduce angst, have either the angst suit the situation, or the vice versa.

    I'd say keep the angst to an absolute minimum in general though.
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  • From ANON - staar on February 03, 2015
    Feel for Teddie but Hermione didn't need to act that way/....man Ron must of done a job on her for her to act that way !!!! Rose and Scop thats nice let Ron drop !!!! Thanks for this and see you soon ....Don't forget the others :):)):):):):):)):):):)
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  • From ANON - Victoria on February 03, 2015
    Great story with potential for two hot romances, Hermione with Teddy and Rose with Scorpius. Looking forward to fun ahead....Teddy is so honest! I suppose that bodes well for their interactions in the future but it's made things tense for now. I'm sure it will all work out soon.
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  • From ANON - staar on February 02, 2015
    Very nice twist !!!!!!
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