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Reviews for The Fallen Lion

By : AnonymousTigress
  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on October 02, 2016

    Just found and read this wondrful story - It's far too good not to be continued.

    Please, please, please update again soon


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  • From morningstorm70 on September 06, 2016

    Please update  i like to know what happens next 


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  • From ANON - PaipurrbakRighter on March 25, 2016
    I really liked your story so far: smooth flow, good characterisation, and nicely paced, even the odd few spelling mistakes don't detract from the world you are creating, but as Harry and Co are English and the canon is set mostly in England, or at least in the British Isles, please, please, please be careful with letting unintentional Americanisms slip in.

    It is only ever 'Mum', 'Mummy' or 'Mother' never 'Mom'; 'trash' not 'rubbish'; and we don't 'fix meals' unless they are broken - we 'make dinner' or 'get dinner ready' or even 'serve dinner'. That said, please don't think I'm picking on your writing, I found the piece eminently readable, it's just that those few little things break the spell, which is a shame as the overall standard is very good.

    I wish you well in your writing, and can't wait to read the next chapter. In case you're wondering why I'm only raising these points now, it's because I haven't been on AFF for years and only just found this and read it. Please do keep it coming.

    If you would like any help with a final proofing, I would be happy to offer, as you might suppose, I am English, and very much the same generation as JK Rowling. If it helps to establish my credentials: I lived for quite a number of years in Palmers Green, North London; where they filmed one of the scenes with the Knight Bus (Night scene, with a long line of shops on the right edge of the screen).
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  • From ANON - Jai on February 14, 2016
    Love this story! Miss you
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  • From Kittykat575 on January 01, 2016
    Awesome!!!! Loved the Book of Shadows at the 32nd.
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  • From ANON - SlythindorMalfoy on December 31, 2015
    Wonderful chap! Looking forward to more. :D
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  • From ANON - staar on December 28, 2015
    very nice x-mss Harry had Good..the book of shadows (charmed ones ) almost fell off my chair with that one..but good , in the story, anything that can help Harry is ok !!!! thanks so much for the update and happy holidays !!!!!!!
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  • From Jan on December 26, 2015
    I like sweet chapters like this one😊 a very nice and warm Christmas day🎄 please update chapter 26 soon
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  • From CDGaymer on December 25, 2015
    good chapter, was hoping to read it last night but by the time i was gona read it, it vanished.
    so like what each gave each other. plus i liked what little connor gave to them as well. wondering what harry will be able to use from his book of shadows.
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  • From djaddict on December 25, 2015
    Really fun chapter!

    I love the gifts, so perfect. Thanks for the Christmas present!
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  • From ANON - starr on December 14, 2015
    nice of Neville to name his son with Harry's name !!!!! they are good friends ~!!!!!! you love to have us hanging to see what fait awaits that Ginny bitch @@!!!!!! Thanks for the update :):)):
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  • From Jan on December 13, 2015
    11 days 🙀 its way to long! Lol, luv ur story😁 this was a sweet chapter, Harry with his godson, made me wish this was a MPreg story😌 please update chapter 25 soon.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on December 13, 2015
    aww this was such a sweet chapter that i cant wait to read more of what is to come. please update again soon :)

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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on December 13, 2015
    Beautifully done. Let's hope that the medical staff don't believe that Ginny is crazy. She may be certifiably evil but she knew exactly what she was doing! Got to love Kaspar, even for a dog, he goes above and beyond being smart. Who couldn't just love that!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Talliane on December 13, 2015
    Awe! So happy they named Gabriel after Harry :) can't wait for Christmas now! Lol. Kinda worried about what the lawyer has up his sleeve though ... :/
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