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Reviews for The Masks of Real Heroes

By : Aelys_Althea
  • From Zoha-Lixue on January 05, 2019

    I both hate and love this story lol. It is well written and I am just amazed with how much I prefer this version over the original. Not every part, mind you, but the overall theme puts some of the original to shame. Mainly with how Voldemort handled the fact that Neville could have been the bot of prophecy. I hated how it was kind of glossed over at times and feel like some as evil as he would have made sure both boys where taken care of just to be on the safe side. Maybe not to extent of killing them both but pretty much like it was done here. With him trying to kill the one he felt best fit and someone else going after the other. Also, not to speak of abuse as though it isn't devastating in an variety, but I always thought the original idea of it was kind of silly. The Dursley are terrible people but only just so. I can't really think of them doing anything that would cause Harry Potter lasting damage in the original series. Yes, they were horrible, but he went on to meet some amazing families and gained a better understanding on what it truly means to have friends and loved ones. They felt more like negelctful bullies who could be easily ignored at times. Using words to hurt him. While I do not think sexual abuse would have made it better I feel like it was still a little PG in the way it was handled. Like they made the family a little relatable where everyone, no matter their background, could pick and choose a moment where there family had done the same. 

    Your story has so much life and I found myself rooting for people I had originally hated in the past. I kind of liked how Harry didn't know everyone or everything that was going on. We got an outsiders view to events and it was pretty cool.


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  • From SaeChanOshi33 on June 07, 2016
    Love your story Wandless magic is rear you have magicly powerful to do it
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  • From ANON - Lexi on January 27, 2016
    Love the story. You have a real tallent for writing. I look forward to further stories from you. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Jan on January 20, 2016
    After all they went through they finally destroyed the horcrux 🎉 please update chapter 29 soon.
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  • From Jan on January 11, 2016
    Oh wow, all those students, they were all sitting ducks, all gathered perfectly for the death eaters 😱 please update chapter 28 soon, can't wait to see how Harry and Draco are going to destroy the last horcrux?
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  • From Jan on January 02, 2016
    😱 Voldy's at Hogwarts!?😱 I can't wait for chapter 27 to see what's going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 02, 2016
    Well fuck. "And So It Begins" is right. Damn. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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  • From Jan on December 29, 2015
    Hope Neville's ok, hope they find him soon. Please update chapter 26 soon.
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  • From ANON - Tami Lane on December 20, 2015
    That was so beautiful. I have literal tears in my eyes. So glad they could finally open up to each other. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 18, 2015
    Beautifully done!! You handled that last scene REALLY well. Thumbs up!
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  • From Jan on December 12, 2015
    Lol, your welcome😁 though I do hope you know that my words were for Draco and not you? It says a lot about a writer when the reader feels they can communicate with the characters of the story, don't you think?😋
    No Harry/Draco in this chapter but there was a lovely first meeting between godfather and godson😉 please update chapter 24 soon.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on December 09, 2015
    What am I reading?
    Please tell me why or how Harry managed to do a complete 180 in terms of personality and mannerisms.
    I thought I was reading about Harry being used and abused (which I liked), but now he is suddenly all confident and talking to people and being...normal...and confident.
    Did Stephen die? Why was he obsessed with Harry in particular?
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  • From Jan on December 09, 2015
    Oh Draco, 😔 you F'ed up sweetie, big time! Please update chapter 23 soon, can't wait to see what's going to happen next with Harry/Draco, as well as the meeting with Remus and Sirius.
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  • From ANON - eh on November 27, 2015
    I'm hoping that you will bring Lucius back--that they will find him tortured though alive, especially since there is no body. I hate that he got killed off.
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  • From ANON - starr on November 22, 2015
    Had read some before but I stop, don't know why ????!!!! But now I just finished all of it and man was I floored of all that I missed...Poor Draco hope Harry can get all his things together to be their for Draco...also can he help Narrissa get back to herself, he does have this thing to help people and he should be able to help her !!!!??????? please !!!!!!!!!!! see you soon with another update :):):)
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