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Reviews for The yellow Brickroad

By : Lalani
  • From Kvarta on January 16, 2017

    I'm so glad to see that this story is not abandoned. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)


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  • From teriwright on October 08, 2016

    Are Russell and Severus the same person? I was quite confused reading this chapter since the names seemed to be used interchangebly.

     


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  • From ANON - moodysavage on October 05, 2016

    I'm still not sure about this story. I can see Severus maturing and getting a family so that doesn't bother me. But so much is focused on the girls that it feels more like a next gen fic instead of a Severus fic.

    And I was so disappointed that they sold their house!!! The yellow brick road house!!! I don't  see Severus letting his home be sold like that. Coming back to help with the Voldemort problem... yes. But not totally leaving his home. It would have made more sense to close it up until their return. But I am enjoying your story so far.

    And will there be any Harry friendship? It seemed to be hinted at and that would be really great.

    oh my freakin' gosh... your code to leave this review is 'robledo garcia mussidan'!

     


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  • From ANON - on October 05, 2016

    I am absolutely loving this story.  This version if snape is so great.  It makes me happy.  I can't wait until school starts. Are we going to have any of the twins povs? Again  I love it!  Keep writing 😀


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  • From ANON - lusting_for_snape on February 16, 2016
    Yes!!! Finally a story that paints Lily in her proper light. She is so self-centered, selfish, condescending and arrogant. I've never liked her.

    LOL, major kudos for the snark of the daughters towards the Potters.
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  • From ANON - louane on February 15, 2016
    Tssss Lily is so full of herself ! I can't wait to see her reaction when she 'll see Severus wife !
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on February 15, 2016
    *Tut* Of course Lily thinks Snape has been single and pining for her all these years. I really wanted to see her face when she met his wife and children. I hope she'll go back to the house :-)
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on February 11, 2016
    I am surprised that Snape would go for facial piercings... But I suppose he isn't Severus Snape any more, is he?
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  • From ANON - lusting_for_snape on February 10, 2016
    I love the yellow path with footprints to the front door. What a delightfully creative detail :-)
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