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Reviews for Gooey Melting Hearts

By : Blackkitten23
  • From Smile317 on December 11, 2021

    Wow. Lily is truly a scary piece of work. I'm glad Remus is doing better and like that Lyall and Gill are moving along nicely. This story definitely has a lot of moving parts. I always amazed at authors who can keep track of everything going on and tie it all together, a skill I sadly lack. Which is why I'm an avid reader not writer. Kudos to you. Great job. 


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  • From Jan on November 25, 2021

    What must Lucius do? Please update chapter 22 soon.


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  • From Smile317 on November 21, 2021

    Interesting punishments. Things are starting to move forward. Would love to see more of James and Severus.  Can't wait to see what happens next. Great job. 😁


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  • From Jan on October 28, 2021

    Lol, I absolutely love Gill, he would make a perfect step daddy for Remus, please update chapter 21 soon.


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  • From Smile317 on October 20, 2021

    Sweet chapter. Everything moving forward in a good way. Makes me nervous for what's to come. And I'd still like to see Lyall and Gill get together. 😁


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  • From Jan on September 29, 2021

    Gil's becoming one of my favorite characters. Wonder what Mrs.Potters goons do, or say to Lily, please update chapter 20 soon.


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  • From Smile317 on September 26, 2021

    Interesting pairing....Gill and Remus' father. Can't wait to see where that goes. I'm glad that Remus is getting help. Would like to see that cuddle between James and Severus. And still wondering about Dumbledore. Thanks for the story. 😁


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  • From Smile317 on September 02, 2021

    Very interesting chapter. Hopefully Lyall takes it to heart and makes some changes. Still waiting on a comeuppance for Dumbledore. And more moments with Severus and James. Can't wait to see where this goes. 


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  • From Smile317 on August 13, 2021

    Somehow I don't think Lily is going to take her letter very well. Hopefully the letter to the Potters is much better. 😊. Can't wait for the next chapter. 


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  • From Jan on July 30, 2021

    Please update chapter 17 soon. 


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  • From Smile317 on July 28, 2021

    Interested to see what Lily will say. Can't wait to see more of James and Severus together. Ingenious way to help out Lucius. Thanks for the update. 


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  • From Darkest_Fantasy91 on July 07, 2021

    Please update soon and post new chapters I want to see what they will do to help Lucius and I want to see what lily is up to 


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  • From Smile317 on July 04, 2021

    Getting intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens. Thanks for the story


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  • From Jan on June 12, 2021

    Love this story, it's been a while but I loved catching up, can't wait for chapter 15, hope it's updated soon. 😊


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  • From Smile317 on June 10, 2021

    I'm glad that you're still working on this. I can't wait to see where it goes. I'm happy that things are currently looking up for Severus. I'm a sucker for happy endings. Poor Lucius though. 😪 and still hoping Dumbledore gets his comeuppance.  Thanks for the update. 😁


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