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Reviews for Indecent Proposal

By : AshleyZ
  • From irianaceleste on April 29, 2012
    I didn't mind the huge jumps in the story since it was easy to figure out where the story was at each point in time.
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  • From kontesaNera on October 12, 2009
    I keep coming back to read it again and again!
    I so enjoy reading it! It's just perfect!!!

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  • From kontesaNera on August 25, 2009
    Hi, I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story.
    It definitely isn't too long, I've always wanted to read more of a quality stuff like this, and again I've found myself wanting for more of it, but that's my problem.. :)
    Although it's a kind of marriage law fic, this one's plot is very unique one. And so simple one too. I loved it.
    Great, great job!

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  • From ANON - sarah23 on December 26, 2005
    wow that was one of the best stories i ever read good job!
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  • From ANON - mona on November 05, 2005
    please write more!!!
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on October 29, 2005
    You had me so caught up in the story I didn't even realize how long it was or wasn't but at the end you did jump a bit to the two yr thing, it would have been cool to have read the part when she told him she was pregnant. Anyways, great story I look foreward to more of your writing.
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  • From ANON - Samantha on September 25, 2005
    That was great! I wish more people wrote more like these.

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  • From ANON - katherine on August 06, 2005
    It was really good. never exepted to turn out like that.
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  • From ANON - DRAGONS GIRL on September 27, 2004
    LOVED YOUR STORY ESPECIALLY THE END THEY HAVE A SON. WRITE A SEQUEL.^^'
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  • From ANON - Samantha on July 23, 2004



    Dear Ashley,

    HI!!!!! YOUR STORY WAS GGRREEAATT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 100%!!!! I have something just like only Hermiioone pputs up mor of a fight.
    Can you please tell me how to submit a story? I would relly like to send in one of my own. Thank you!!! And I can't wait till you put
    up some more of your sabolos stories.


    Your fellow Draco/Hermione fan,
    Samantha
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  • From ANON - Michelle on June 17, 2004
    Thank you so much for writing. This fic was WONDERFUL!
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  • From ANON - TG on April 14, 2004
    Excellent!
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  • From ANON - The Blue Lady on January 08, 2004
    Chapter 2:
    I read this awhile back and just re-read it and remembered that it was one of my favorites on AFF and I even "marked" it. You really write great dialogue!! Your Draco is so sarcastic and funny! Enjoyed the plot! A sweet baby son for Draco and the both of them so, happy after such a rocky engagement! "...like a cave man, and throw me over your shoulders... We can do that tomorrow night!" "House elves can be so handy... they'll be gone by tomorrow... didn't doubt that for a minute." Very entertaining stuff!!

    ~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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  • From ANON - Varada on October 30, 2003
    Sweet and beautiful! A great story, great character development and interesting witty humor every now and then! You should definitely consider doing a sequel to do this, or in fact even do a short piece, in the year between them getting married and when she found out she was pregnant! I like your writing style - your fluff was romantic and sweet, and not overboard. Yet your ability to write Draco's crave, need and desire spell out your ability to write hot raving smut as well. A very good blend of sweetness and tension between the characters. You succeeded in making their marriage sound like a happy ending! Well done! Can't wait to read more of your works!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on October 24, 2003
    This was awesome!! There is no need to worry if it was to long!! It was not boring at all and kept me wanting more!! It would be nice if there was a sequel. Though it is nice where it left off. I would like a sequel though because you are so good at writing that I would really enjoy it!!! I really like the way you write and I think I've read some of your other stuff too. It's a really good story and would be nice if you continued. Let me know if you do!! Thanks!!!
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