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Reviews for Proditio

By : ochiteirutenshi
  • From KagetsuAsame on June 09, 2004
    *whimpers* It's so good though. There aren't many dark HP fics out there and I prefer them over the regular ones. *sniffs* You have to keep going. Please?
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  • From ANON - lisa on April 10, 2004
    gosh!! i hope everythin works out cuz i wna another chapter!! >.
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  • From ANON - Rose on March 16, 2004
    Harry is too much of an original character here for my tastes. You have good way of writing in common but the story is about this guy called Lupus now and not Harry Potter anymore. There were no good explanations of why he turned to the dark. Actually there's too little reasons for anything he does. The changed looks and threats, acting, it all comes to the fact that this is the ghost. I have read few Schitzo!Harry stories before and you fit right in but the reasons are important.
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  • From ANON - an opinion on March 16, 2004
    I like this though I find many things not to my liking.
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    It's intriguing to see how Dumbledore's mistakes have summed up. He should've remembered/known that one shouldn't so painfully obviously direct someone's life. It doesn't feel right somehow to put the whole blame on Dumbledore. Rather it should be on the magical world as a whole, though how much had AD affected to the image of the boy who lived is a question that leaves one ponder exactly who came up with that name in the first place.
    Sirius' death was quite a blow to Harry, especially when he was one of the main persons responsible for it... I am just following along to see where do you end up with this. I wouldn't like to see Harry as the next dark lord. That would be rather a mockery of Voldemort and Harry is better. Well, where ever you go, I'll follow.
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  • From ANON - an opinion on March 16, 2004
    Good start. not too lashy but not dull either.
    q. how did Harry end up in Diagon? perhaps you should place ** -marks or something if there's a jump in scenes or time.
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  • From ANON - Ancalyme on February 19, 2004
    Review.

    You might not know, but Umbra does not mean Ghost, but Shadow, and that is quite a difference. Albus means White, though you could relate it to pure, and Severus means harsh, as the English word sever, as in sever punishment. Draco also means Dragon, derived from the word Draconis, note
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  • From ANON - lee marker on January 06, 2004
    Great storie I love it way to go.

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  • From ANON - Kethhry on January 05, 2004
    It's one of the best dark Harry fics I have ever read. Maybe there's a chance that Snape will become dark again, one of Ghost's followers. He's one of my favourite characters. I do not like to see him dead. But whaterver you choose to do with him will be fine. Please do continue, I'm very curious what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - Linis on December 26, 2003
    OKay I'll give you that. Another brill chapter... I like how you have HArry and Lupus interacting... Also I like Snape's interest in Lupus... Never know what's gonna happen with him... The mark seems quite cool... and as harry says not too obvious... can't wait for more.

    Happy Christmas

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - alex on December 24, 2003
    This is a great start to a fic, i hope u continue,, and update soon, thanks!
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  • From ANON - raija on December 23, 2003
    i absolutely love lupus Umbra as I find some oof my qualities n him but he is just soo....i don't know I havt wot words for him. And your worl is just unbelivable. The only flaw iat iat it takes long time to update....well jusy yhis last chapter but anywys. Try to update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lupusdragon on December 22, 2003
    Gods yes, I want to cuddle! *huggles da plushie* Woo hoo! I loved the mindscape! That was friggin amazing. Harry is the creative side, makes sense since he is the "innocent" one while Lupus is the analytical one. Oh, will Sevvie figure out who he is? That would rock, converting Snape to one of his own fwerswers, that would be awesome.

    I do sort of feel bad for Harry, I mean, with all of the guilt and the cold... although, that is funny, him traped in a snow storm while you face winter in Alaska... I take it you don't care for winter much? ^__^ Personally, I love the snow... *giggles*

    Take all of the time you need. This is a great story and I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Zero on December 22, 2003
    harry is of two minds. so cool! keep the story coming!
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  • From ANON - Raija on December 09, 2003
    This is absolutely great. i like lupus and I like your version of dear old Voldie.
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  • From ANON - LINIS on December 09, 2003
    A brill chapter... th off hand manner in which both Lupus and Riddle work is so well written it's unbelievable. Just one question this time... should Lupus and Draco be talking about the wands in the library as it isn't very private and if word got back to Dumbledore he'd have a panick attack... probably would be a good way to die really. Also Snape seems off with Lupus, is this because he suspects things about him or is just uncertain how to take the confident young man before him? A confrontation between those two would be a good thing to see.

    Anyways another good chapter and I can't wait for more

    LINIS
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