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By : ochiteirutenshi
  • From ANON - zero on November 28, 2003
    please write more. it it very good.
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  • From ANON - LINIS on November 28, 2003
    Excellent... nicely done with his introduction... can't wait for more intereaction between Lupus and the other students especially the griffindors... maybe start a bit of rivalry going between them...

    Update soon please.

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - Raija on November 27, 2003
    This is great. just one question...will severus find out who our beloved Ghost is?
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  • From ANON - Rasticles on November 27, 2003
    Another excellent chapter, especially your parting words. I love how you have still kept old Harry hidden in there somewhere, i kneel down and kiss the hem of your robes in praise
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  • From ANON - Raija on November 26, 2003
    If this seemed to be interesting when I read the first chapter...well now I am completeky hooked. So *falls to her knees with puppy dogs eyes begging* Please update this soon. While I love the bad Harry I kinda miss the old one. But as you said you are the author and you have to power. Harry would do a good Dark Lord so go you go you.
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  • From ANON - Mynona Suo on November 26, 2003
    *glomp* I love. Pos mos most haste. The look of this ghost is most interesting. And Draco *drool*. Anou...why is it that most of the fics are Severusx?. Funky. O.o I suppose you'll be slashing with Snape too?
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  • From ANON - Rasticles on November 26, 2003
    I love this fic! yours ideas are really original and your writing style rocks! keep going with such a good job
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  • From ANON - Shi Megami on November 26, 2003
    T.T not fair i wanna know whats gonna happen next T.T so many good fics but few r to my liking plz update soon

    May the wings of the fallen let thee rest easy,
    - Shi
    12:38 Nov 26, 2003
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  • From ANON - Confised on November 26, 2003
    Thank you for responding to my review.


    1. I like that each chapter is getting longer and lobger.

    2. I like the details that you gave of last summer? To me it is the details that make the story for me. I like knowing how Ghost keep dumbledork from finding him. I like that Draco sort of became the house or throy wife seeing to Ghost needs. I think the warding of their apartment was a great idea. And I love this easy friendship they have suhat hat Ghost let Draco do arrange his makeover, I think they are both hot now. I like you did not make draco staying about the money.

    3. Does Draco have a new last name? What will the formal teachers at Hogwarts call him? Hmm, although you did not take us through the process of Draco's custom wand, can you please tell us what it is?

    4. Since there is one custom wand left to be made for this generation, Harry needs to make a new friend or ally, so that he can control the wand, will that be snape? Question: I understand that wand maker only has to make three and can report the fourth person to the ministry, but what happens if Voldie ge hol holder of the wand maker after the three wand?

    5. I think in the last chapter you refered to them being in their 5th year? or they or are they in their 6th year?

    6. How magically powerful are Draco and Ghost? They studied the Dark Arts this summer did they study any other forms of magic over the summr, elf?gon?gon? vampire? ect?

    7. Are The boys studying muggle or wizard martialarts?
    I belief that

    8. I am not understanding, why Dumbledore, let it go when he found out Harry's new name. I would have tried to get through to him, I.E. have Lupin? molly? someone he trusted write the reply.

    9. I love how Ghost mourns Harry, realizing his faults! I think that is what I hate about a lot of fics, the fact that people make Harry so dumb, oblivous or reckless for no reason. Or when they make him super Harry. In your fic, he has found so far outside ways to make himself powerful. The custom wand, Draco has his right hand man and guide to the wizworlworld, the emancipation, taking control of his life, the extra training.

    10. J.K. Rowlings has really disappointed me. Here it is book 5 only 2 more to go. Poor Harry is now destinied to kill voldie. But he is getting no magical training to do so. hell what is learning the same spells that all the "junior death eaters are learning plus the rest of the school. Suppose to do against a man who graduated from said school, and has spent at lest the last 50+ years studying the dark arts and doing everything to make himself immortal. But enough about that rant.

    11. Who will teach DADA? Will Harry ask Snape for extra lesson, since he knows so much about the dark arts?

    12 Will dumbledork keep Ghost secrets or will he spill them?

    I really like this story. by the way. in the end can harry and Draco get Narcissa back for what she did.

    And can Ron and Hermione get burned? I want to see them cry.


    Confused
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  • From ANON - Kira Izumi on November 25, 2003
    I loved your story, I hope that you update it daily because I don't think I can go a long time wihtout knowing what happens next. Also I hope the slash pairing you are talking about is Harry/Draco because its the only slash that I read. But since your story is good I will still read it because it captivates me. But think about that pairing it the most common pair people like to read about.
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  • From ANON - lupusdragon on November 25, 2003
    *blushes* I didn't even notice that. I feel like a dope now.... maybe because I haven't finished OotP yet... I am a bad girl.
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  • From ANON - Ren on November 25, 2003
    That is a great fic. I find now that I have started reading fanfictions, I rather like dark Hary fics, I hope you continue in the direction you are currently going, and i totaly agree with you on your dislike of harmone(i don't think thats spelled right, oh well) she just rubs me the wrong way, i suppost because ree reminds me to much of one of my 'friends', she's not really a friend, she kinda just attached herself and wont go away, kinda like a leech. oh well, I'm doing nothing but ranting now, I hope you continue with this fic, I love it.
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  • From ANON - LINIS on November 25, 2003
    Yo!Yo! what an excellent story and so well written... as for plot wholes there are always plot holes but just ignore them and carry on as if everything is fine..

    The sorting will definatly be good... I wonder if Dumbledore will try and talk to the new Harry? forgotten how to spell his new name already but i will get it down...

    Cat wat wait for more.

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - Sam on November 25, 2003
    for the first 5 chapter's you have wrote it Post Oop, yet for this one...

    You have Harry and draco in 5th year and
    Wrath is delivering a letter to Sirius.

    *raises hand* Me CoNfUSeD!!!!
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  • From ANON - Firestorm17 on November 25, 2003
    I wouldn't worry too much about the supposed plothole RE Unnaming. As far as I understand it, a wizard who has received the Dementor's Kiss doesn't physically die or at least not right away. The way you're written Narcissa, I wouldn't put it past her to leave her husband's soulless shell in a persistant vegetative state long enough to dispose of her son's claim on the inheritance. That sort of plan would work if you assumat tat the magic etc doesn't change over until the previous Head of the Family's heart actually stops beating.
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