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Reviews for Childhood\'s End

By : existemi
  • From Vintage on July 16, 2007
    I loved this. I have just reciently become a Mr. weasley fan and a hermione/mr.weasley fan. Thank you. Please write more.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 23, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - auntbecky on April 29, 2004
    I have been wanting to see this pairing for sooooooo long. Please keep updating and don't be surprised if it takongeonger than you think it might.
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  • From ANON - star on April 29, 2004
    Hey this is really looking interesting! Please update this soon!!
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  • From Excel on April 29, 2004
    Hmm, what an interesting plot. Hermione and Arthur? That's definitely a new one on me. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - TCRegan on April 29, 2004
    I think you have a wonderful plotbunny here. There's just some things that need to be worked out or addressed in later chapters.

    hy dhy did the Death Eaters attack the Burrow?

    2. Why did the Death Eaters (if it was them) attack the Grangers?

    3. Why did Dumbledore let Harry and Hermione off for end of the year exams. Exams still were going to go forward in second year even after the basilisk stuff. I think you should change that.

    4. This isn't a thing you need to be overly concerned with, but the plot did move awfully fast. Try to get more description in it.

    But all in all, I like the way things are going. Just make sure you have motivation behind characters' actions. Death Eaters are pe, to, too. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Diva on April 29, 2004
    Well I am very interested to see where you take this! Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Mary-Louise on April 29, 2004
    I think this is a good start and I'm looking forward to the rest. I've never seen this pairing before...
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on April 29, 2004
    Not a bad start! You've got a very unusual pairing here, and I would like to see where it goes. Update soon.

    Only gripe is that your chapters could be a little longer. Otherwise, it's too soon to tell how well you write! :)
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