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Reviews for A Winter Tale

By : Bylle
  • From Taurisith on May 18, 2010
    You know, when I first saw this fanfiction, I thought, "this is going to be weird, isn't it?" Well, I was right. But it was a good weird. This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, hands down. Yes, there were a few spelling errors and it looked like you'd hastened through a few chapters, but it was wonderfully thought-out and, while being strangely erotic for old people lemons, it wasn't mindless smut. It was intellegent and a joy to read.
    I look forwards to your next story,
    Seite.
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  • From KaidaSydon on November 27, 2009
    Dear Max,

    I don
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  • From crazedphoenix84 on February 22, 2009
    Awwww! that was such a sweet story! im glad that I decided to carry on reading, despite the mistakes with spelling and format, it would have been fantastic if you could have had it betaed, its one of the nicest love stories I have read in HP fanfiction, I would reccomend that everyone give it a chance, even if Albus/Hermione isnt really the thing they like to read! I also very much liked your Severus and his interactions with both Albus and Hermione. Once again, great story, thanks for sharing : )
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  • From tuesdayknight on January 06, 2009
    I've probably read 40 other forced marriage fics based on the WIKTT challenge, and this is one of the best. I was surprised by the pairing, but you wrote it quite convincingly. It's a terrifc love story, and you did a good job with the plot, too. I'm eager to read your other stories.

    I'm impressed that you can write this well in English, since it's not your native language. Few writers have this much talent. The story could use a good beta, but it is very readable as is. I encourage you to spend your time and talent on writing more stories, rather than on fussing with the spelling on this one. If you write in other fandoms, please send me a link to your other stories (original fic, too).

    Congratulations on this fine story.
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  • From JMerlin on August 05, 2008
    I like your story.
    Russian Babushka dolls - what do you mean?
    Is it a matreshka?
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  • From ursomalevolent on September 06, 2007
    I can't tell you enough how much I'm loving this story. I very rarely even read het, let alone something like Hermione/Dumbledore, so when I first read the description, I jaw was at my knees. You've definately changed my mind though. Though I'm only on chapter 4, I couldn't resist leaving you a positive review about your beautiful writing.

    You noted in ch. 3 that you were in need of a beta, and though you've already posted the last chapter, I wanted to let you know that I'd be more than happy to edit it for you if you'd like. I know that English isn't your native tongue, but the story is a little tough for English-speakers to make out in some places. The minor gramatical changes would make your story absolutely perfect, because you already have a superbly beautiful story.

    Let me know if you're interested in a beta.
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  • From SusanSnape on August 29, 2007
    i never thought i would like a hermione albus story but
    this is really good and it took me only 2 days to read it completly :-)
    i hope i will find more stories so good written
    sorry when my writing is not so good i
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 27, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From krypteria on February 25, 2007
    i'm usually not a fan of Dumbledore/Hermione pairings, but this was so fantastically written, that I couldn't help but be! I also loved the story for the vampires as well, what an idea, having them in a Parisian brothel!

    I'd love to be able to write a story off of that, about Le Conte and his brothel. May I have your permission to do so? ^_^
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  • From ANON - Amerina on November 18, 2006
    i like your story but all the messed up words make it hard to follow. you should not have put a story up with that many typos its almost un-readable.
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  • From ANON - Veronica on October 19, 2006
    I am still crying...such a wonderful story...*sniff but a happy ending...even if Dumbledore had to die.
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  • From ANON - Lyssandra on September 13, 2006
    I loved this story...it was very well writen...thanks for writing it.
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  • From ANON - SlytherinSarah on August 27, 2006
    I would feel honored to give you the amount of praise this story deserves. But I doubt there are enough praises to give it what it is due. This was beautifully written and has more than once brought me to tears. The careful thought and meticulous imagery made me almost late to work two days in a row so that I could attempt to drink more in. Thank you for the escape from reality through this marvelous piece of art.
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  • From ANON - erin on August 23, 2005
    awwwww....its over. *tear* that was a great story, i think its the only dumbledore/hermione fic i will ever be able to enjoy, at least, i wont be able to enjoy others as much as this one. well, happy endings are always great, and this one is no exception. im kinda sad its over, but im sure i will be able to live on...eventually. lol. well, best of luck and i hope i will be able to find some more works of yours in the future.
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  • From ANON - erin on August 22, 2005
    that was hot! the key is to picture the same basic severus from the movies, but, well, you described him pretty well:less greasy and sallow-skinned, so he looks a hell of a lot better. ya, that was a good chapter, cant wait to continue reading
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